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Captivated, he embraced his dainty partner in crime Dramatic bold pauses, leading posture keeping her time, Unique sultry, fiery ruffles, frame her sleek scarlet gown Golden sun caressed curls, eyes intense mahogany brown, His stance dominating, he guides her through the auburn air Spontaneous their rhythm, passionate tempos flair, Intense synchronised mirrors reflecting interaction Energetic man mysterious, luscious attraction, Pulsating hearts, romantic half-moon rotations in flight Vibrant, rustic, festivals of multicolour unite ~ Music commences dazzling lights, gathered crowds start to roar Appointing their collaborator, taking the dance floor.

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Date: 3/12/2021 9:02:00 PM
I felt i was there dancing with passion! Nicely penned. Great imagery and use if words to make the poem dance.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/13/2021 12:50:00 AM
Thank you, for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment.
Date: 3/12/2021 11:03:00 AM
Very well done, well penned, very creative
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/13/2021 12:50:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/7/2020 2:27:00 AM
Very inspired and congratulations on your win. I’m still writing nothing but love poems and I would love to hear your thoughts Thanks
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/7/2020 6:28:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Love makes the world go around :-) you can put the love spin on anything, dancing, nature, have fun.
Date: 10/4/2020 5:22:00 PM
Oh, the flair of passionate dance! Well-demonstrated in this image filled poem. Congratulations, Joanna on your first place win.
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/4/2020 11:49:00 PM
Thank you, for taking the time to read my poem. Have a lovely day. :-)
Date: 10/4/2020 6:45:00 AM
Such a pretty and vividly penned scene. congrats on your top win!
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/4/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Have a lovely day. :-)
Date: 9/9/2020 7:56:00 PM
Ps. I hope you consider entering your poem in the Autumn/Fall contest...so good! A fave! :)
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 9/10/2020 12:02:00 AM
Thank you, yes I will enter it. :-) have a nice day x
Date: 9/9/2020 7:55:00 PM
This is a really creatively written poem, Joanna! There is a definite dance like flow to it, too. Excellent and enjoyable to read! :)
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 9/10/2020 12:02:00 AM
Thank you :-)
Date: 9/9/2020 11:01:00 AM
A dance of passion...Enjoyed your writing style...
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 9/9/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you :-)

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