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Our Bliss At Its Purest We Loved Each Others Naked Sight

Our Bliss At It's Purest We Loved Each Others Naked Sight


When our love, its hottest and satisfying nights first begun
we each tried to give our all and not ever be outdone.
In that effort, soft showers of love-hearts began to pour
birthing swelling streams leading straight to paradise shores.
Within its spacious gardens, we walked in bliss, hand in hand
With our spirits singing, praise be this sweet rewarded land.

With eager hearts seeking, we sailed across heavenly blue seas
Tender love words speaking, we each wrote forever love pleas.

For precious are those diamond memories, deep their treasures
Never could such be destroyed, not those screaming pleasures!
Passion at its zenith, our burning desires at their greatest height
our bliss at its purest, we loved each other's naked sight.
O' the softness of your loving-heart and welcoming thighs
we felt heaven thanking it gifts, with both our contented sighs.

Those days are eternally burned, into this grateful soul
if time could us return, on that list we would both enroll.

Those  fledgling nights created so much more than simple heat
gave such passion never to be outshone, joined as 
one made complete
Caresses, of those soft showers remade this
broken woman into more
Bathed in your paradise, unfettered I can soar 
Joined as one, under the gentle gaze of the burning stars upon us
Lost in blissful moments 
all around us recedes to what once was
 
The beauty within our hearts had a rhythm wanted by all
With the strength of our bonds we answered loves call
 
Rich in memories, such wealth is written in soul 
and in mind
no other in any lifetime 
could compare to you I find
The heaven's can't contain the love that we two share
at the highest height of our passion none can compare  
Intense heat from our bodies is what gave those stars their light
Our bliss at its purest, we loved each others naked sight
 
My soul too will be eternally grateful for you my greatest love
as the stars and galaxies all rejoice over the love we share from above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/5/2018 3:50:00 AM
A beautifully written, eloquently passionate and romantic gem of a poem you two have so brilliantly crafted, Brenda and Robert. A great collaboration and a FAV. My warmest wishes to both of you. T.J
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Date: 9/2/2018 7:51:00 PM
This masterpiece is so eloquent. A divine gift of love shared within your lines. "soft showers of love-hearts began to pour" This collaboration is a keeper for me and going into my Faves. Congratulations to you both on creating this memorable poem! xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Connie for your inspiring reply.. Brenda, you are always writing great my dear friend. I hope you always know that there is ever increasing and wonderful poetry in your kind heart to gift us. All you have to do is sit down write, and pour it out!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2018 1:13:00 AM
Ah Connie thank you so much! Robert is a joy to write with! Because he challenges me to be better!?? Hugs Brenda
Date: 9/2/2018 6:57:00 PM
Bravo to both poets! A great collaboration
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2018 1:11:00 AM
Thank you so much! Lol you are much too kind!;) Hugs Brenda
Date: 9/2/2018 5:29:00 AM
Your Majesty...and Sir Knight...Camelot rejoices...love & light...^WW^
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/2/2018 7:34:00 AM
WW a one third of a dysfunctional family! Lol! Thank you WW so very much! Hugs Brenda
Date: 9/1/2018 3:57:00 PM
Hello Brenda, This is an most excellent collaboration with your friend Robert. The imagery, and the depth of the words and the richness of their intent are all marvelous done in presenting a tapestry of beauty, true passion, and unforgettable moments of love and emotion. A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/1/2018 8:26:00 PM
Gary thank you so very much! It always fun writing with Robert he tends to challenge me but I love it Hugs Brenda
Date: 8/31/2018 10:46:00 AM
My dear twin sis Bren, a passionate pulse does throb with beauty through your exquisite love poem written with my wonderfully talented friend, Robert. A superb collaboration!! Such a glorious richness of emotion and luscious loving imagery is so beautifully expressed, I'm left in breathless wonder and awe at the depth of your golden artistry woven together seamlessly by two such immensely gifted poets. An absolutely shining gem of expressive inspiration, desire, love and splendid poetry.. A FAV! Love and hugs to you, my twisted 3.5 twin sis.. ~Your sane, but crazy over this poem, twin sis :))
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/31/2018 6:10:00 PM
Ah my sane poetic sister! Thank you so much! Robert always challenges me to be better and after reading the ones you two write! Oh la la! I was almost embarassed to post one that could possibly not bring the heat you guys always bring! Plus with my simple words well you see what I mean! Lol 3.5 sister? Truly? Lmao my my dear sane of this twisted duo ...ooops forgot WW so triplets lol! You are amazing as Robert! Thank you ! Love your twisted insanely insane (lol) sister of the twisted trio clan!!;)
Date: 8/31/2018 9:29:00 AM
This is love so beautifully defined in poetic phrases. Love is such a wonderful thing, to be able to hear your heart sing, feel your pulse race and knowing the smile upon your face is as big as it can be. Truly a fantastic and epic piece of love poetry from two very talented poets. Bravo Brenda and Robert.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/31/2018 6:06:00 PM
Ah Chris your words warm my heart and are so appreciated! You are really too kind my friend lol! Have me blushing;)! But seriously thank you I look forward to each and every one of them trust me ! Hugs Brenda
Date: 8/31/2018 8:34:00 AM
My dear friend, truly a great honor writing this passionate poem with you. Your glowing verses sing of passion and nights of hottest romance. Such that bring memories one treasures until their last breath. You put your very heart and soul's deepest desires and night's love tryst into this piece on love and its infinite depths...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/31/2018 6:04:00 PM
Robert you always seem to challenge my mind and I enjoy that! Thank you Robert for you was my very first collaboration I ever did! And your talented pens always seems to rise to the occassion with such golden ink with a touch of spicey added in for good measure! I will always look to our collabs and have a smile on my face!;) You are an amazing poet Robert be it your work from the past or new it is all amazing! I am thankful for your friendship which I will always hold dear and our chats ate just as amazing! Thank you Robert for just being your sweet kind self and for your friendship I can't stress that enough! Hugs Brenda