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Deb M

Date: 3/11/2024 1:29:00 AM

Clive, l just read your biography and see you are an ex paramedic! I recently wrote a poem called “Unsung Heroes” in honour of paramedics who l admire greatly! You may like to read it…or not! Ha… Debx

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/11/2024 1:36:00 AM

Yes, I was and absolutely loved it. My poem Another Day At The Office was taken from an aspect of my time there, nearly did well in a major competition. Hashtag Paramedic is another I submitted recently. I will check your poem out, I'd be interested to read it.

Deb M

Date: 3/11/2024 1:23:00 AM

Haha….this made me smile Clive! Its own little language! Kids would love this…its fun and silly…..and clever!! Debx

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/11/2024 1:31:00 AM

Just don't ask me to translate it! although I would be interested to hear what people think it means, that would be fun. Thanks Deb, much appreciated.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/10/2024 4:53:00 PM

a light, almost whimsical read...liked it...enjoy your evening, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/11/2024 12:38:00 AM

Thanks Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/10/2024 5:19:00 AM

Very intriguing wordplay here dear clive. Creative.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/10/2024 5:23:00 AM

yes, I had the thought of certain letter sounds eliciting an emotional response, even if the words are complete nonsense. The poem Jabberwocky does exactly that so I thought I'd give it a try. Experimenting really, glad you were intrigued, thanks IE