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Only One Way Out ( the Zoo )

Stinky smells and obnoxious groans a Zoo trip...I'd rather be hit by stones!!!! I hurried the kids through they screamed and kick with kung-fu I blamed it all on "The Misses" hormones.................. _______ Contest

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Date: 9/19/2010 3:54:00 PM
That is one place to put to the blame..But it is not nessacarily true but it gets a laugh..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:23:00 PM
Very cute, Must be for that zoo contest!!
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:59:00 AM
Fabulous writing. The best to you in the contest Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2010 9:49:00 AM
Funny yet cool write, Rick. enjoyed it
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Date: 9/16/2010 12:09:00 AM
yes i'm with you Rick all the way with this fine limerick, Harry
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Date: 9/15/2010 8:35:00 PM
I'm laughing thinking how the kids are affected by "The Misses" hormones, Rick. Great limerick for Barbara's contest. Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/15/2010 8:24:00 PM
misses hormones huh? , anyway cute one good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/15/2010 8:18:00 PM
Well ..this is cool Rick.. and blaming it on the Misses hormones makes it so fun.. enjoyed .. and if for the contest good luck luv...
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