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Off the Wagon

5 mi. away from Mount. Mental, Take a left on Anxiety Avenue. Stare into space and dream for the great, But there's nothing left to view. Panic Palace is up ahead, Lost in the Forest of Fear. Fell off the scrappy, old wagon, Everything good has disappeared. Fury Farm has acquired a new worker, Though Delusion Driveway looks packed. All the thoughts and myths come swooping, Constantly being attacked. St. Stress is a no through road, Cave Concern has collapsed. Can't seem to spot an escape, All this has happened since the relapse.

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Susan Manley

Date: 10/5/2023 11:12:00 PM

There is a block party goin on there. I am imagining it as a cartoon. It would be funny as a song set to music. Now I wonder what the whole burg is called. Now entering "Mind Trip" no services.

Writing Muse
Date: 10/6/2023 4:14:00 PM

Haha exciting idea, you must be very creative! Trip to Troubled Town, would that work?

The Situation

Date: 9/30/2023 8:24:00 PM

I can tell this is the real thing. a real subject a real happening. No computer could hatch this dream. this is a winner It would seem.

Writing Muse
Date: 9/30/2023 8:26:00 PM

thank you! it is really nice to hear and has really made my day :)

Fire Bird

Date: 9/30/2023 4:49:00 PM

This poem is beyond words, it is amazing and expresses all the emotions that we don't want to feel but always do, I am amazed at this poem, its wow. - Phoenix :)

Fire Bird
Date: 9/30/2023 4:52:00 PM

They mean so much to me and bring me comfort. - Phoenix <3

Writing Muse
Date: 9/30/2023 4:51:00 PM

This comment means so much to me! Your poems have such deep and expressive meanings as well, I feel great my poems mean lots to you <3