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Ode to My Mother

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Jacqueline (Jackie) Trestrail: 1932 ~ 1978

She was of this rich earth and clay a darling lass so full of life and so wont at play who used to water ski in Turtle Bay At Carnival time costume in hand marched and danced she in a masquerade band till Las Lap and midnight's last stand The year was nineteen fifty-three when down the aisle walked in grace and beauty my beloved mother and bride to be A Catholic girl whose love was true torn between the man she loved and faith she knew but followed her heart and said "I do!" Was a leap of faith and a call to fate to stay all the madness and mayhem at our gate or leave Trinidad before it's too late Her island home for us all gave up and of life's bittersweet wine drank from its cup but a poisoned chalice she did sup She was an abider of all that's good and raised us in the joys and love of motherhood in the devotions for which she stood Whom taught me in the ways of love and edified the outcast soul in me to rise above when all our lives she was a part of The breast that suckled life in arms needed more than healing salves or curing balms yet bravely you fought all its harms Now it's been twoscore years gone since God among His saints counted you as one and a darkness this world fell upon. February 2018

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Date: 10/26/2019 10:56:00 PM
Had to visit one of your poems, and am glad I did! What a lovely, heartfelt tribute to your beloved mother, Keith. I love how you describe her strong faith and devotion to her family. I’m sorry she left this world so soon, but she obviously left an indelible mark on your life! I also am blessed to have a wonderful mother, and am so grateful to God for her!
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Date: 6/7/2019 1:13:00 AM
What a fantastic write. Never saw this before. Thank you. Panagiota Romios
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Date: 12/12/2018 3:28:00 PM
such a beautiful tribute Keith, I am so blessed to still have my mother:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/12/2018 5:28:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to your mother, Keith. If it hadn't exceed the 20-line limit by 10 additional lines, it would have placed even higher. Congratulations on your win! There were many terrific entries, including yours. Thank you for participating in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
A beautiful tribute/ode to your Mother, Keith. Your last line, 'and a darkness fell this world upon' is a profound line because when we lose our beloved Mother there is a dark emptiness upon us cast. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/28/2018 9:38:00 AM
A truly exceptional tribute written by one that has suffered that immense loss. From the picture , I see you had a truly beautiful mother my friend. And that we both have written tribute poems about our mothers having passed on. A fav....
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Date: 4/10/2018 3:42:00 AM
If I didn't know better, I 'd say I was your mother, Keith, but that doesn't make sense as I was one when she got married, so even though I do believe in reincarnation it would have been nigh onto impossible. I WISH I had met your mother and danced and played and sang with her though, like you did. I miss her too because of this wonderful poem. I love this for her, and it's GREAT!
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Date: 4/8/2018 7:51:00 AM
This is such a beautiful tribute and one that touches many people here who have lost their mother too. I love how you wrote this, and I'm sure she is honored by this.
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:23:00 AM
Keith...sometimes...I miss Pop's steady hand in white-capped waters, I call on the Angels to keep me steady...will send them your way...jimbo
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Date: 3/27/2018 12:04:00 PM
Truly a wondrous and heartfelt tribute to your mother my friend. So sad that you never really got to know her and spend far more time with her. Yet your poem and your fine poetic tribute tells that you knew and you so loved! Brought tears to my eyes , made me think again of my own mother my friend. A true gem and a fav....
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Date: 3/26/2018 7:08:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your mom. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Date: 3/25/2018 8:51:00 PM
A real nice poem! The opening lines left me engaged to the very end of your poem.
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:33:00 PM
Hi Keith Such a nice tribute to mom....Salute to the Mothers
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Date: 3/4/2018 2:28:00 PM
What a beauty !! Both the poem, and the lovely photo. What a heart-melting ode to love :) Hugs !!
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Date: 2/6/2018 6:18:00 AM
I would be lost without my mother, a beautiful dedication to your mum..
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:41:00 PM
What a great journey Keith, two score and six i had to look up, what a great ode.
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