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Alas, beautiful gardening gloves, I knew you well. I remember that early March morn; I opened your package and slipped you onto my hands. At first you were a bit stiff and uncomfortable. Over time you softened and became my weekly companion, pulling weeds, cutting flowers, and guiding the nozzle on the water hose allowing our foliage to flourish even during the hot summer months. You've faded, though, from our days together in the sun. Your bubble grippers are worn, your fingers tattered and torn--worse for the wear. I will surely miss you as I will miss the warm, languid summer days we shared together. Soon, I'll cover my hands with woolen mittens or furry gloves. But you'll hold a special place in my heart as I stand on my front porch shivering and yearning for next spring's arrival. Inside my desk drawer I've placed my new pair of gardening gloves, already purchased for next spring. Each morning during the seemingly endless dreary winter months, I’ll open my desk drawer and slip them onto my hands, embracing the hope they symbolize.
oh! frost in the air mist is on the nearby hills ugly bulbs in hands dig, bulbs are planted they slumber peacefully while waiting faithfully in silent darkness locked in winter's frozen sleep secretly they grow bulbs work mystery some morning soon in springtime pale, green tips appear soon scarlet blossoms slowly emerge, gracefully beauty to behold

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Date: 10/29/2023 1:31:00 PM
A lovely gardening write/fun picture. I am not gardening anymore but I do have one small bush I would love to plant. Oh Well, maybe one day... Have a wonderful day..................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:27:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Paula. I appreciate your thoughtful words. I hope you plant your bush someday....soon...maybe by spring :-) Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 11:59:00 AM
A wonderful poem with true heartfelt words... With the last of the tomatoes and beans to be picked tomorrow, Sara, I'll say adios to my garden gloves. Freezing nighttime temperatures predicted this week. Thanks
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:26:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Jeff, and for sharing your gardening story. I don't know where you live, but here in my part of Texas we're getting our first freeze early, Sunday night and through mid week. Not a winter fan. Sigh. Thanks for your kind words. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 10:18:00 AM
I just LOVE planting bulbs for the spring. It is not so much a chore as a pleasant pastime. Enjoyed so very much. I love the planting, the waiting and then, finally, the beautiful laughter of the Spring. Love your poem, too. Much love and prayers with a smile, Love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:25:00 PM
I, too, love planting bulbs and waiting for what you call 'the beautiful laughter of spring.' Well said. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for stopping by, have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 10:11:00 AM
Ugly bulbs planted… locked in winter's frozen sleep…scarlet blossoms emerge! I think you’ve done this before…you net a beautiful flower and poem!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:23:00 PM
I appreciate your visit and comments, Kim....about netting both a flower and a poem. Creative. I'm grateful for your kindness and support, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 8:47:00 AM
I can't decide which I like best, the prose or the haikus. Both have their value. So beautifully written. Blessings.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:22:00 PM
thank you Victor for your resounding appreciation of both aspects of my creation. I'm grateful for your visits. Have a blessed Sunday evening, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 8:10:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your haibun is incredibly smart. I am in awe of how you have beautifully transformed the mundane object of gloves into an adorable and endearing piece of art. The way you have skillfully crafted each haiku is truly remarkable, evoking deep emotions and leaving a lasting impact.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:21:00 PM
thanks, dearest Sotto, for your stopping by and for your kind words....You're observant. I do like making the mundane things around me seem beautiful. I'm grateful you found my work artist and remarkable. Your words and support mean so much to me. I always look forward to reading your comment. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 5:32:00 AM
My other pen name is poetic gardener... although I did not do much gardening this year.. I do love petals and poetry.. You haibun is really clever, but not everything lasts forever and I am sure your gardening gloves have had good six or seven months.. In my garden i have 30 different roses bushes... this year the dahlia did not blossom... was strange weather... I look forward to those scarlet blossoms in the spring.. the season of birth.. an excellent haibun..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:19:00 PM
I rather like the 'poetic gardener' moniker...clever. I love flowers as well, especially daffodils. Bill and I planted roses a few years ago, but they didn't survive the Texas heat. So we replaced them with Oleanders--they endure the heat quite well. Like you, I prefer. Starting in February I go outside every daychecking to see if anything is blooming yet. I'm eager, hubby says. Have a pleasant evening & thanks for your visit, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 5:25:00 AM
I like this one, I sometimes get a pang of guilt replacing a faithful item - nonsensical but some things just feel like an old friend :) lots of beauty in your haiku, enjoyed this one x
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:15:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Di11y. I too occasional have those pangs of guilt in replacing something that's been a faithful companion. I don't think it's nonsensical at all. I'm grateful you found beauty in the haikus...this was a fun write for me. Enjoy your Sunday evening, Sara
Date: 10/29/2023 4:32:00 AM
Ah so you love gardening too dear sara, may i ask whats your favorite flower or plant? I find sunflowers pretty but roses too are gorgeous and dahlias, because my beloved loves dahlias! He is also a gardener! I think many turned to gardening during the pandemic especially lockdown. I found myself more interested in planting too then. I really cant praise this haibun enough how you’ve written an ode to your gloves so cute and sweet you are and those haiku are amazing and well crafted, touching!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 3:14:00 PM
thanks, Ink, for your early morning visit. My favorite flower is a daffodil. They bloom here in late January, giving me hope that spring will arrive soon arrive. We turned to gardening shortly after we moved here in 2014. Our neighbors began during the pandemic. Thanks for your kind words about my Haibun. It was a fun, light write for a change. Have a splendid Sunday filled with light, hugs, Sara

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