no win

if you are in defence are you playing the game never moving forward whilst they do the same there's no fun to be had just stopping the play question what I am doing day after day after day I'm not moving backwards nor giving up ground that seems important if a point were to be found so play on through all weathers feeling a win is in sight but nobody wins if they are willing to fight

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/11/2024 8:31:00 PM

Yes so true !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/13/2024 1:22:00 AM

Haha - you know me

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/10/2024 1:20:00 AM

The stakes are sometimes too high to fight Dilly, a pyrrhic victory is no good to either side, so it’s probably best to play the game of defence, WW3 is only prevented by adhering to these tacit stances, this one certainly packs a punch without actually throwing one, excellent! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/10/2024 1:24:00 PM

Thank you David, I enjoy your intelligent interpretations :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/9/2024 8:01:00 PM

This is a poem of positive thoughts. Being happy can be worth the most. This is a beautiful poem that has parable qualities.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/10/2024 12:24:00 AM

I'm trying to shake the mood Hilda, maybe I need to read the message in my own words, thank you for your comment, appreciated x