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Night Time Thoughts

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Paul Willason

Date: 5/28/2023 5:53:00 AM

An imaginative and connected poem...observations of snow quite striking. Finding silence etc...the quiet. How you worked in the storyline, lots of content to absorb...all up a very engaging read DD.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/28/2023 5:57:00 AM

Thank you Paul, I appreciate your comments. I quite like call and response poetry and was able to use the idea within this poem. It's also true that Eskimo kisses as they were called then were my favourite too :)

Paul Bell

Date: 5/28/2023 2:04:00 AM

25 degrees here, but I do like the way snow covers my garden, hiding my attempts to having it looking like the Chelsea flower show. We call snow, the white stuff.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/28/2023 10:23:00 AM

The more I read what I've written, the more I'm seeing your perspective! I would not know about things like that though, it's all innocent frozen water snow references!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/28/2023 3:56:00 AM

It does cover imperfections too, but that's another poem. Daring move with the rename - be careful of brain freeze :) thanks for your comment, nice to hear from you