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Nictitating

"The haunting of the night suggests the dark is the vision into a truth, whilst the day is blinding deception" Quote by Poet Nictitating membrane emerges during sleep Then mouth clamps shut, so impossible to speak The dream grabs my hand, forces a stroll Chained mind to body then darkness stole Images/emotions arrive as past thought Create scenes of chaos, nerves jangled and fraught I know the ending though origin confused The details of the middle disorientedly refused Breath that stalls, gets lodged in the throat Inhalation of smog laden air and dust mote Then fall through the silence into the scream Clawing for safety, half way in/out of the dream A silhouette of a familar shape snakes into view Not sure if the insights or apparent facts are true Never assured of verisimilitude of day When just the closing of eyes takes it all away

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Date: 7/26/2023 2:06:00 AM
Just my kind of poem I love it!
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Date: 7/26/2023 3:28:00 AM
Thanks Terry - bad dreams are more fun to play with during daylight :) thanks for your supportive comment x
Date: 7/24/2023 2:11:00 PM
I like the way you do dark. Takes you on a journey, hits the mark. Might keep one eye open tonight. You never know what's lurking in sight.
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Date: 7/24/2023 2:27:00 PM
It lurks, it snarls - gets you as you sleep Ensure you close eyes that you want to keep (apologies! Thanks for the kind rhyming comment :D)

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