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Myth and Menagerie

Channels and only children choose the spectrum 
of sight carried by the drought of love 
in the morning leaving before breakfast

Always moving in high decibels to recover 
and revive the remains of the day 
by just adding water to their wine

Above the breast and tempting tension 
the fate of the wicked is enshrined by 
experience in an environment of excitement

Still time will not hide away the pain 
bought on store credit as we live 
and die by the light we leave lit

This is a nice thought of myth and menagerie 
dimmed by the lampshade 
holding the inspiration hostage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/9/2017 9:26:00 PM
Excellent write my friend...very deep in its nature...and slanted stars are rancid lol...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^
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James Swartz
Date: 12/9/2017 10:11:00 PM
Thank you WW. Happy Holidays to you too! Thank you for the kind words I'm glad you liked this one. Don't worry about the rancid stars it's just trying to get people to read its work.
Date: 12/9/2017 2:03:00 PM
uhm ... reads like a bunch of non sense mister swartz ... for love be ... be for love ... worded hammer needs no instruction ... there is no light darkness can't see ... darkness is the cowards we shake from my sleeves ... carried by a verbal cyber spiraling disease ... with outh the rhyme who needs reason ... my reason ... our reason ... is beyond your minds ... love could never be captured ... essence escaped only by the hollow laughter of hatred ... how far in the hollows is an explanation. ?
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/12/2017 8:31:00 PM
James, his placed his feet on my work too. I just ignore and not waste my time !!!!!
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James Swartz
Date: 12/9/2017 4:08:00 PM
Well my poetry isn't for everyone especially those who don't like to think. Next time though just say you don't like it without wasting space in the comment section with your own nonsense.
Date: 12/9/2017 11:13:00 AM
Such depth of thought and complexity of expression this cerebral poem be, James. The levels of comprehension are amazing. What a beautiful mind you have. Ty for sharing such elevated existential wisdom w/the lowly. This magnificent poem freed my captive inspiration. Hmmm ... wonder where my muse flew off too now? Lol! This is a great poem, my dear friend. Supernova bright write. An instant classic fave for sure. Love and joy always.
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James Swartz
Date: 12/9/2017 4:10:00 PM
Hey thanks Freddie. A litle secret is I like to write to music often. I have not listened to elevation but I will now. Thanks again my friend.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/9/2017 11:17:00 AM
Btw ... great title. Listening to a new jazz classic while re-reading this splendid poem. "Elevation" by Jackiem Joyner. The music and your words are just bumping my thoughts ever so high and higher. Love and more love forever.
Date: 12/9/2017 9:40:00 AM
Deep thoughts creat awesome poems. James, this is. A spectacular piece I sure did enjoy it this morning. Good for you my dear friend :) hugs and smiles :)
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James Swartz
Date: 12/9/2017 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Akkina I'm glad you liked this one. Anytime I can help others think deeply I will. Hugs and smiles back to you my friend.
Date: 12/6/2017 10:17:00 AM
- We have "forgotten" so much ... and have a lot to learn - A great poem, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Swartz
Date: 12/6/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise for coming by and commenting. You are so right we do need to relearn everything.
Date: 12/4/2017 10:07:00 PM
To hold inspiration hostage is my constant minds torment. I loved reading this and feel inspired to not let the dimming of light take away from the enlightenment of words. Great poem James!
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James Swartz
Date: 12/4/2017 11:22:00 PM
Thank you Kristina! I think inspiration comes naturally to you. The hard part is not tormenting ourselves for no reason. You understood the subtlety in the choice of my words. Thank you.
Date: 12/4/2017 9:13:00 AM
Deep stuff, if only everyone had the innocence of a child, what a wonderful world it would be...
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James Swartz
Date: 12/4/2017 4:31:00 PM
innocence is easily lost and never found. The world would be so different. Thank you my friend for coming by and commenting.
Date: 12/4/2017 6:47:00 AM
A deep thinker--your words make me reread the meaning of each word--well done, friend!
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James Swartz
Date: 12/4/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Vijay! Great complement!
Date: 12/4/2017 4:10:00 AM
I loved this, it reminds me of Raw Thinker, the way you write makes us all contemplate things on many levels!! True poetry
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James Swartz
Date: 12/4/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Arthur! I tend to over think life as it is so I like to make those around me think too.