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Th sequenced American cinquain I first created and published here in 2007

My love
Beguiled me,with
Soft sensuous lips,sleek
Long thighs with rounded hips,twinned heart's
Enlaced
with
Eyes closed
As lips caressed,
Mouths joined,impassioned
Tongues explore,in our love's embrace,
Time-framed
in 
The warmth
Of love's invite
Encompassed my desire,
In two soft whispered words of love,
Be mine !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/29/2019 11:19:00 AM
Yes - love this! Joyously kinetic and passionate, and I very much enjoy the layout and metre - fluid and bouncy. Very nicely done - adding to my faves! - G
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/29/2019 1:55:00 PM
Bless you Greg for your encouragement
Date: 12/23/2019 4:30:00 PM
Bravo, Brian. Hot stuff! Beautifully penned.
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/24/2019 2:50:00 AM
Cheers Line,Christmas blessings
Date: 12/23/2019 3:05:00 PM
Oh, this is beautifully written. I love it, Brian :)
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/23/2019 3:30:00 PM
Too kind,Heidi thanks
Date: 12/23/2019 6:39:00 AM
Much beauty found in your poetic expression! <3
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/23/2019 7:16:00 AM
Cheers Kim,Christmas blessings