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Mosquito Pete, The rip Off

Mosquito with a bloody mission Taking what's mine without permission Loss of blood and a bump Itchy scratch with a lump Donation of blood, no commission

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/12/2010 8:32:00 PM
Another great win. congratulations!
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Date: 8/7/2010 6:13:00 PM
Congrats Rick on another first place win my friend.. good write ...enjoy your first place ..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:31:00 AM
loved it , congrats on your win
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Date: 8/7/2010 3:49:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Rick
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:44:00 AM
Rick, What a funny and clever poem this is! Congratulations on coming in first! I loved this! I am not sure if I thanked you or not for making my haiku Indian summer number 11 in your contest, but if not, Thank you. I am honored. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your great entry and big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:38:00 AM
Rick, what can I say, Quite witty, My man. Keep up the witty work. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:35:00 AM
Horrible blighters they are, congratulations on your win in Carolyn & John's contest >> James
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:50:00 AM
Congrats, Rick. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:29:00 AM
Top honors for this incredibly funny poem, Rick. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:05:00 PM
Good one, rick, those dang mosquitos!!
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:45:00 PM
You should send Mosquito Pete and "bug" my teenage mutant ninja turtles :) Thanks for your lovely comment!
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Date: 8/4/2010 4:44:00 PM
Ha!!! This is really good! Great job, Sharon!
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:59:00 AM
lol i love the second line he he,, and ending . . . enjoyed...P.D.
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:58:00 AM
Got a chuckle...But those bites are not fun..I do not enjoy that part of summer...Good work..Sara
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