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Today I have open eyes and a straight spine Birds cheep and car wheels rush Wires fan the sky Posts lean The buckles on my boots tap out a tune As the sun cleanses rather than warms There are cracks in the earth But I don't fall in

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Date: 3/5/2024 1:55:00 PM
Things going well make a perfect day. I am happy feeling Spring. This was lovely.
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Date: 3/5/2024 2:15:00 PM
Thanks Hilda, appreciated x

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