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More Nighthawks

Gathered but disconnected at their core Witching hour wakefulness On display whilst alone

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Sara Jama

Date: 3/18/2025 8:00:00 PM

I love the use of witching hour in your poem. Brings images of Ravens gathering for the Norse god Odin. Fitting since he is associated with poetry.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/19/2025 5:39:00 AM

Ooh lovely, thanks Sara! This was a old one from when I couldn't get enough of Edward Hopper paintings. Trying to condense the feeling of the painting into as few words as possible :) thank you for your comment :)