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Nighttime arrives like a welcome lull in a fine opera. I step outside noticing how the nighttime graces the sky with its ambient, deep hues. I climb into the hammock strung between two trees in our backyard. As the evening darkens, I lean back hoping to relax and put behind me the worries and stresses of the day. Over my head I see the moon, a deep silver ballerina turning pirouettes with perfect form. In the distance, I see moonbeams arcing across the land, their beauty speaking to my heart and soul.
moonbeams, whispers of light ride upon the starry sky as if velvet black asked them to dance moonbeams come amidst the stars, as an ode to the sun bright pathways in starry night—dreams take flight

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Date: 11/29/2023 2:54:00 AM
Hello Miss Sara. Good Morning. This is beautiful poetry and wonderful imagery. You grace us with elegance and if you read back your words you will see you described the sky of night marvelously. For those who do not witness it miss out. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always (smile)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:43:00 AM
awww, thank you Lisa for your visit and for your thoughtful words. I'm grateful you found my poetry beautiful and elegant. I appreciate your kindness, dearest Lisa. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/6/2023 1:32:00 AM
Both prose and poetry flow into a lullaby. Your descriptions are always brilliant. Blessings
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Date: 11/6/2023 4:06:00 AM
thank you kind, Victor, for your supportive and encouraging comments. I deeply appreciate your consistent support. Have a blessed day, Sara
Date: 11/6/2023 1:00:00 AM
An enthralling beautiful beaming image of the sky at night in your lovely verses Sara, an enjoyable read… Belle
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/6/2023 4:07:00 AM
thanks, Belle, for your visit and for your sweet and thoughtful comments. I appreciate you. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 5:39:00 PM
A soothing and serene picture dear Sara. I really enjoyed relaxing with this one! :)
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Date: 11/6/2023 4:08:00 AM
thanks, Linda, for your kind words. I'm delighted you were able to relax with the words. Have a splendid Monday, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 2:24:00 PM
The imagery takes me on a journey to a twinkle of stars and a moon shining upon them, so beautiful the silvery ballerina spins on her toes! Love it, Sara! Captivating~ Xhugs Anaya
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/5/2023 4:35:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Anaya. I'm grateful you found my poem a captivating journey. hugs back at you, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 1:41:00 PM
wow it's a free verse/haibun hybrid! very innovative, with a great opening line, and i love the moon portrayed as 'a deep silver ballerina' :)
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:34:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Charlotte and for appreciating my hybrid...I couldn't quite figure out how to put everything together. Thanks for your kind words...enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 11:25:00 AM
Very beautiful. Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/5/2023 12:04:00 PM
thank you, kind Paige, for stopping by and for commenting. Enjoy your afternoon, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 10:45:00 AM
Very lovely, soothing imagery. They become part of us, taking in the warmth and light of every beam -- Well done!
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Date: 11/5/2023 12:03:00 PM
soft and lovely comments, Joe. I agree, moonbeams do become part of us...I like the way you think. Thanks for stopping by and have a splendid afternoon, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 8:35:00 AM
A shining star you are Sara, well done!!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/5/2023 8:40:00 AM
ahhh, thanks Mark. I appreciate your kind words. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 7:59:00 AM
Absolutely beauteous in imagination and composition, Sara. Bravo! The artwork enhances yet your poem standing alone would still enchant. Have a blessed Sunday. ~
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Date: 11/5/2023 8:34:00 AM
thank you, Gina, for your meaningful and thoughtful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the artwork. It really struck my fancy. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 6:00:00 AM
What a magical write this is! As someone who loves the moon i am just captivated and in awe of your word weaving and imagery! So descriptive and celestial with such stunning flow to your lines! “ a deep silver ballerina turning pirouettes with perfect form.” Love that line the most! So melodious! I love the picture you’ve used here too! Its absolutely gorgeous! “ moonbeams come amidst the stars, as an ode to the sun” wow! I am truly loving this poem! You are truly so gifted! Fave this is for me
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Date: 11/5/2023 8:36:00 AM
dearest Ink--your words touch my heart, like magical stardust. I, too, love the moon and some nights am just enamored with it. I'm grateful we share that love and I'm glad you loved the imagery. Your compliments and insights lift me up and inspire me. Thanks for faving this one. Have a splendid Sunday, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 5:17:00 AM
Dear, Sara, The moon has consistently served as a profound muse for poets throughout history. Your poem adeptly captures and evokes the essence of this inspiration, beautifully conjuring imagery and showcasing a remarkable imagination. Its portrayal of moonbeams and the gentle whispers of light traversing the celestial sky is truly enchanting. The night possesses a distinct voice, radiance, and ability to beckon profound insights.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/5/2023 8:39:00 AM
dearest Sotto--I agree, the moon is a muse for countless poets and writers, myself included. Thanks for your deep praise for my imagination. I'm grateful you found my poem both enchanting and insightful. The moon is beautiful this time of year. Now that darkness arrives early = more hours for me to gaze at it :-) Have a splendid, Sunday. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 11/5/2023 4:25:00 AM
..."as if velvet black asked them to dance" What a metaphoric image....beautifully written Sara.
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:54:00 AM
thank you, kind John, for stopping by and appreciating the metaphorical image..enjoy your Sunday, Sara
Date: 11/5/2023 4:24:00 AM
Yes. The Night has her own voice, her own light, her own way of inviting insight. Just love this,... a true inspiration. Much love and joy and prayers for all your best, Gina
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Date: 11/5/2023 4:55:00 AM
thanks, Gina, for your thoughtful words. I agree, Night is powerful and inviting. Thanks for your appreciation. Wishing you a joy-filled day as well, hugs and prayers, Sara

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