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Engulfed by the darkness,
Surrounding all of me,
Consumed by the poison,
A disease it can be.

Lonely or desire to be alone?
depressed, or desperate is the tone?
To scream and shout what is inside,
Difficult to share,not easy to confide.

Anger, frustration,disappointment,
Betrayed and unfair is this life,
To slit own veins in the wrists,
With a razor or simply a knife.
Whom i owe this living to?
Why do i breathe when i inhale?
What is the use of such a journey?
When all i am destined is to fail?

All i ever want is peace of mind,
Heart and soul with all my might,
How cruel can the world be?
With everything against me to fight.

For whom i live, for whom i try,
No one around me, when my eyes cry,
This loneliness inside me is rushing,
To my heart and lungs, it is crushing,
My ability to have that one last gasp,
That minimal oxygen of purity in me,
To release my final groan of pain,
To finally be expelled and free.

While the soul lingers again,
And the same feelings arise,
This time in a universe of spirits,
Ghosts or people-them both i despise,
The innate loneliness never runs out,
The self deficient sense of doubt,
Like the lonely moon in the sky,
Surrounded by stars yet so sly,
That twinkle and sparkle so so bright,
Only the moon knows, its the dawn of the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 1/3/2018 4:38:00 PM
Lonely is the person who is fond of peace, lonelier is the person whose loved ones are not beside him. Well done put up your points in a quite sensitive and relatable manner.
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Suraj Grover
Date: 1/4/2018 5:01:00 AM
Thank you ! :)
Date: 11/25/2017 12:07:00 PM
Nice writeup suraj. what did u mean by the dawn of the night? Why did u relate the moon with the stars?
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Date: 11/25/2017 12:20:00 PM
Great thought
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Suraj Grover
Date: 11/25/2017 12:12:00 PM
Because even if u have a sea of people with u, and in your heart you are alone,then no matter what, you ll feel alone. And as for the dawn of night..its like ppl hope that okay things will be ll b fine! But the person who is alone knows its just the beginning!