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I nearly fell apart, felt despair Picked myself back up and focussed Just split seconds can devastate when resilience is low My teenage daughter hadn't got ready on time, I tried gentle encouragement, step by step advice, firm instruction but she was heading towards missing her singing lesson paid for by Nana I shouted at her that the lessons will be cancelled if she doesn't get sorted As she cried it can't be done whilst the minutes ticked away, she said 'I prefer Daddy' I went and sat downstairs and felt a failure, I let her know how much time was available and left her to it (she got ready, came downstairs and asked me to brush her hair and I made her a toasted teacake) She spoke of her worries, which are typical for a teenager and I know feel unfixable in the moment I said does she want a frappe after her lesson and she said she didn't deserve it and I felt awful that she believes rewards always have to be earned. I said it doesn't always have to be, it's my way of saying I love her no matter what. She told me off for always rewarding bad behaviour and I said I've just disregarded the behaviour as I want her to know she's loved and everything is ok. In the car she was singing, she told me a funny retort she had planned if a friend of a friend insulted her (like they do her friend) and we laughed (as I believe witty retorts are inherited from me, but did say consider whether she does actually say it) When we arrived some information I'd requested came through about a drama group and she says she's interested in joining She poked her head back in the car to say she'd like a frappe and I'm just here now waiting til she returns. I've brought the dog, it's raining, he's miffed he's not got out for a walk but luckily he can't tell me who he prefers, his face suggests it's currently not me but unlike earlier, I recognise feeling bad is sometimes, often, mostly, temporary and that I can turn things around. I'll probably still cry at some point, it's been a tough day.

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Date: 11/17/2024 6:18:00 PM
Blame the rain. Rain causes gloom. Your story is pretty much everyone's. Better days ahead.
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Date: 11/17/2024 10:43:00 PM
The back story to this one is absent in the telling but the crux is getting to a point where you feel you have nothing left to give and are letting people down. The fact I found reserves and turned a negative situation around felt extremely important as a point to reflect on should that occur again. I wrote it very much for my own benefit to process and recognise the moment though. Better days are ahead but so are worse days - so acknowledging coping can be good.
Date: 11/17/2024 2:03:00 PM
Disciplined by all means DD. Singing lessons on top of the daily and extra routines. Daddy's girl has an out and knows what buttons to push. Hurtful moments, if jaded or not, it's all biological! Although I do believe wisdom isn't just for elders and that your daughter will be everything she sets out to be with your help, and just as smart! Loved the family dog in the mix of things, witnessing, loving unconditionally. Enjoyed :):)
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Date: 11/17/2024 2:33:00 PM
Beautiful Anaya, thank you :) the dog spent a good old while mildly annoyed about the non walk. My daughter was fine straight after her strop luckily x
Date: 11/17/2024 11:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Being a teenager is tough "But" being a parent is even tougher.  I would say, I am doing this out of my love for you. When college came they began to see/understand my wisdom/love for them. Youth does not have wisdom yet. They need to grown into wisdom. Tough days will come then go but love is always there. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 11/17/2024 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Paula - I remember thinking I knew everything too. We still have lots of happy moments where we are laughing with our matching quirky sense of humour. It is tough when they lash out though. Thanks for your enlightened words x
Date: 11/17/2024 7:32:00 AM
The ones who hurt us the most, in reality are the ones who love us the most.
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Date: 11/17/2024 7:39:00 AM
I usually have a pretty decent resilience threshold for anything uttered by my children - I like to think their insults reflect how secure they feel that I'll still love them anyway and I can slide in the teachable moment when the time is right. I suppose it's true that we have to be invested to be affected - though I think it can apply to nuances of situations as well. Emotions are a complex thing. Thanks for reading

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