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In shadows cast by doubtful mirrors' gaze, I, a tender bloom, in the garden of self, whisper to the moon, my silent confidante. Mirror, mirror on the wall, reflect my worth, not flaws enthrall. Yet, in the dance of self-discovery, I stumble upon the cadence of acceptance, a melody weaving through the tapestry of imperfection. Mirror, mirror on the wall, reveal the truth within, not judgments that appall. Through the dim corridors of self-doubt, I seek the light, a flicker in the obsidian night, a promise to tomorrow, where self-love blooms. Mirror, mirror on the wall, unveil the beauty in every rise and fall. In every curve and contour, a story untold, etched in my flesh, a testament to resilience, a canvas painted with scars that speak of battles fought. Mirror, mirror on the wall, let my reflection echo my spirit's call. I unravel the tape that binds me to standards, embracing hues that paint me in defiance, a masterpiece in progress, flawed yet sublime. Mirror, mirror on the wall, break the chains of judgmental thrall. In the cocoon of my metamorphosis, I shed the weight of societal whispers, and in vulnerability, find strength reborn. Mirror, mirror on the wall, let self-love be the loudest call. For every petal of self-love unfurls, a rebellion against the storms of conformity, a testament to the beauty I define. Mirror, mirror on the wall, illuminate my worth, let confidence enthrall. Oh, within myself, let the light seep into my veins, illuminating the corridors of my being, for in every shadow resides the promise of dawn.

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Date: 11/18/2023 6:10:00 AM
I enjoyed your musings on this. Mirrors are so deceptive. It doesn’t show us ourselves through other people’s eyes. Remember, “ Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.”This saying first appeared in the 3rd century BC in Greek. To me, it’s more in what you reflect back to your beholder. SuZ
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/18/2023 6:47:00 AM
You're absolutely right Suz! Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem!
Date: 11/16/2023 12:23:00 AM
Now this is an excellent poem. It flows so well and the emotions behind it are expressed with a clever refrain. Your English is very good in this one and there is a meter in your free verse, not sure if you meant to do that or not..
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 11/16/2023 5:37:00 AM
Hi! I didn't mean to create a meter, I've just realised that. But thanks for such a kind comment. Your words mean a lot! I'm trying my hardest, learning new words and new structures. Have a great day.

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