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Bodies molded into one, golden by the fire-light Heat between the lovers touch could warm the coldest night Golden locks around her shoulders; the softest hands upon her waist Of all the sweets and wine been tasted- his lips the sweetest taste. Her cheeks were red like roses, and his eyes were bright as day, Imprinted on the others heart, there could be no other way Gentle moans and gasps of love, ensconced in lovers game Eros, Philia, and Agape, with neither lover tame. His heart was her heart, his breath was her breath Making love until time's end, and then his death her death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/12/2013 10:23:00 AM
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Date: 2/2/2013 11:36:00 AM
Very nice... Terry
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:21:00 PM
Ah ha, I see some greek words. I really enjoyed this poem, and from my love of philosophy the greek references just added to it. Nice effect, I don't know if the almost shape of the heart was intentional, because I didn't check out the contest, but nice poem again.
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Dana Smith
Date: 2/2/2013 10:54:00 AM
It wasn't intentional! But thank you for pointing that out! Also, it's nice to see someone get the reference to the Greek philosophy of love =)
Date: 1/25/2013 7:06:00 PM
Dana, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD
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Date: 1/24/2013 4:44:00 PM
awesome!!! Congrats for your win with this very romantic poem.
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Date: 1/22/2013 2:34:00 PM
An exquiste write, wonderful flow and a fine tale. Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:07:00 PM
Nice winning poem....... breathtaking~SKAT
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:09:00 AM
Congrats!:)
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Date: 1/20/2013 7:35:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Dana'lynn! Your poem is very sensual and well written. Good work! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/20/2013 3:21:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/20/2013 3:11:00 PM
Well done Dana'lynn. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/20/2013 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2013 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Dana lynn xx
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Date: 1/16/2013 6:52:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing, and I love it. So much passion displayed through so few words, the power that this poem contains could fuel a thousand suns for all eternity.
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