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vibrant scarlet cloak lady of seven sorrows - walks emerald plank

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/30/2022 8:15:00 PM

Your Haiku's, Joanna, celebrate natural wonder. Here you add a human dimension with the line, "lady of sorrows." Such a fin, thought provoking read on this summer's day. Cheers, Brian

Joanna Feltham
Date: 8/31/2022 1:24:00 AM

Thank you. I'm happy with how this Haiku turned out. Have a lovely day.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/29/2022 8:59:00 PM

Profoundly, subtly penned. Bravo, gw

Joanna Feltham
Date: 6/30/2022 12:01:00 AM

Thank you. :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2022 2:29:00 PM

Love center line!

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/11/2022 2:30:00 PM

Thank you. I think ladybirds are so magestic.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/11/2022 9:41:00 AM

This is brilliant, Joanna. Love the image - unique! BW ~ Mala

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/11/2022 9:46:00 AM

Thank you. I had alot of fun writing this poem, I wanted it to sound a certain way. I'm pleased with the outcome.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2022 9:49:00 PM

This is such a profound KU. Love it.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/8/2022 1:50:00 AM

Thank you, I was thinking outside the box when I wrote this one. I'm glad it worked.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2022 7:41:00 PM

Great Haiku, Joanna, you capture an outstanding scene with great hues and imagery. Thanks for your visit and comment on my page

Joanna Feltham
Date: 4/27/2022 12:51:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. I love nothing more than to see the green message icon light up. Have a wonderful day.