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I built a new stand for my mom A pine tree was into my palms It was for our shoes And also boots too Did all the work till I was calm Syllables: 8,8,8 5,5

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Date: 12/9/2022 12:22:00 PM
I think you both found joy with your building this pine wood stand.
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Justin Abdool
Date: 12/10/2022 3:17:00 PM
Indeed, it was a team effort! She helped guide me while I put it together. She is so smart! Thanks for the comment Jen!
Date: 12/9/2022 10:53:00 AM
... well done for mom, Justin :) -
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Justin Abdool
Date: 12/10/2022 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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