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it's clouded obscured just enough variety to throw you off there's no such thing as a penetrating gaze no beyond nor here or there just this uncomfortable static I can run my fingers round the edges see my hand in front of my face but my feet are planted the composition tells of up and through I feel one dimensionally seen if we two could get higher negotiate ledge after ledge rise up in a balloon just for a moment see further above the canopies that hem us in safe from the licking flames and the prying eyes we'd understand the irregularity of shape the truth of corners and frames how a veil isn't a cage we can add it all up let the leaves fall the flames burn a path send smoke signals into the sky curtains can become ropes to climb down they'll be footholds for up across is missing I realise that now all this searching for depth and I just hadn't looked around successfully distracted

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Date: 4/20/2024 3:35:00 AM
Wonderful Ekphrasis. The fingers smoothly exploring the edges while in peripheral sight with feet firmly planted on the ground is genius. Loved it D.
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Date: 4/20/2024 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Wen :)
Date: 4/16/2024 8:08:00 PM
This mysterious leap to heights is captivating. The images remain in my mind.
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Date: 4/16/2024 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Hilda, glad it intrigued :)
Date: 4/16/2024 4:35:00 AM
A head bender of a painting Dilly, still leave it to you to offer some sense into the impossible collage it offers, for some reason I find this one too abstract and difficult to interpret, so rather you than me navigating with a poetic and plausible interpretation, brilliantly expressed, cheers David
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:55:00 AM
I'm sure on a different day I'd see nothing, but in the moment and with the blurb suggesting it was about what was invisible it got my mind racing about knowing the intangible but not having any words to express it or indeed even ability to properly comprehend the unknown that some feel the presence of. Definitely the realm of the poet and the surrealist. I do enjoy it when paintings like this lead me on a little journey, even if only I can see the leap from line to line. I appreciate you pondering also :)

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