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Love Turn Bitter

Submission so complete and fragile like nylon Love so new, constantly refreshed in the salon such virtue suffers the kill creating a devastating skill for guts to replace passion and fill the gallon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/20/2016 11:34:00 PM
Very stark, and very powerful. A great poem.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much David
Date: 2/18/2016 12:03:00 PM
It certainly can turn, quickly. Another great write, Funom. Peace my friend:)
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/19/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much D. Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 9:17:00 AM
Great comparison and nice poem...
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Nehal
Date: 2/18/2016 9:15:00 AM
Good morning Funom, this turns love from sweet to bitter, sometimes we allow a fragile moment to get the best of us. enjoyed. LINDA
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:46:00 AM
Hello Lindsy! How are you? You are so right. Thank you so much for the comment
Date: 2/18/2016 8:53:00 AM
Great choice of words Funom! Very immersive piece.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/18/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Whatley

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