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When I was a young girl, the dandelions that appeared in our neighborhood captivated me. I spent countless hours walking down the street plucking the dandelions from the ground, bringing them home and placing the yellow-flowered stems in a water-filled Mason jar. Sometimes I gathered them into a bouquet and gave them as presents to my parents or friends. Occasionally, I’d snatch a dandelion stem containing a fluffy white blowball and bring it to my face, examining its delicate symmetry before blowing the white seeds into the air and making a dandelion wish. I was but a child then, carefree and light like a wispy, white blowball. I’m an adult now, no longer quite as lighthearted or worry-free. Yet, I still delight in making dandelion wishes. I’m a ball of tense living, a tumbleweed with steel-toed shoes. Can’t remember the last time, I felt light as a dandelion.

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Date: 9/20/2023 6:58:00 AM
At times I wish you were you naturally light and cheerful self all the time, but I'm aware that things we experience in life are for a purpose; so, I'll take you as you are each day we have together. You conveyed the feelings of childhood well though your poetry, Sara. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. Love, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/20/2023 7:45:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Bill. I, too, wish for my lighter, cheery self....working on it :-) I'll take any day with you as well...any way, any how. smiles & hugs, me
Date: 9/18/2023 2:29:00 PM
Takes me back in time to the wonder of youth, Sara. The architecture of those 'cotton-ball' dandelions is amazing, isn't it? Yet as adults, we just walk right by them. 'Bother!' as Winnie the Pooh would have it. Stirring write, Sara!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/20/2023 7:43:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Gershon. Yes, the architecture of 'cotton-ball' dandelions is amazing. (I like your use of the word architecture.) Yes, sadly, we walk right by many of the wonders of our childhood, unmoved. Thanks for your kind words and compliment. Means a great deal to me. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 9/17/2023 2:02:00 PM
Sweet snippet of nostalgia. Can't say I share the fascination. I always loved to be in the woods though. Your last stanza says it all. We lose so much of our lightness of being as we age. Jaded? Maybe
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2023 3:08:00 PM
I agree, Tom. We do lose our lightness, sometimes without realizing it. Such is the case with me from time to time. Dear hubby always says, 'lighten up!' Thanks for stopping by and reading my words. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 9/17/2023 11:39:00 AM
I remember when you were light as a diamond, when you wrote this poem! Living is a combination of lightness and darkness.But we can go through life lightly or darkly, I called that …lfe, And when I write about wrong things that people don’t want to hear about, they shouldn’t read it. We are flexible human beings .. Choose how are you want to be every day, Oh wonderful poem Sara,, PS,, a Poet Heart has many windows and mini weatherings. I accept you as you are any day.. Pangie xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2023 1:16:00 PM
thank you for the visit Pangi and for your heartfelt comments. I prefer going through life lightly. Sometimes, however, I don't realize I've weighted myself down with 'steel toed shoes.' Thanks for your kind acceptance of me. I feel the same way about you...accepting you and your words for whatever they offer. I appreciate your wisdom. Enjoy your Sunday afternoon, Sara
Date: 9/17/2023 11:38:00 AM
I remember when you were light as a diamond, when you wrote this poem! Living is a combination of lightness and darkness.But we can go through life lightly or darkly, I called that …lfe, And when I write about wrong things that people don’t want to hear about, they shouldn’t read it. We are flexible human beings .. Choose how are you want to be every day, Oh wonderful poem Sara,, PS,, a Poet Heart has many windows and mini weatherings. I accept you as you are any day.. Pangie xx
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Date: 9/17/2023 4:31:00 AM
so many will feel your words, oh how we reminisce our childhood days when life seemed so simple... how things change and you really captured that in your poem.. your use of words takes the reader back into your childhood and gives an insight on how you feel now.. especially that last stanza.. love the ending..
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Silent One
Date: 9/17/2023 4:41:00 AM
I feel the same to be honest....
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2023 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One, for stopping by. I appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you found my poem 'relatable.' Yes, sometimes (not often) I do feel as the words in the last stanza indicated. Thanks for your insights. Enjoy your day, Sara

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