Levitation

"The impact of a friend taking your hand at the right moment can be transformational" Quote by poet Love raises me up, allows me to breathe
Elevated mood, with my heart on my sleeve
Volatile nature of putting self on the line
If I love and am loved, then we'll both be fine
Thank you for allowing me to rest
Acceptance, making me wholly less stressed
The thing that you do raises me up high
Inspirational friend, the embodied blue sky
Onwards we tread, my hand in yours
Natural lift to more peaceful shores
2nd place

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 9:41:00 AM

DD, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words, I like your quote too !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/21/2023 9:46:00 AM

Thanks Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/20/2023 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative Acrostic write. I love to write in the Acrostic style. Have a wonderful day....................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/20/2023 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Paula, it's quite an inspiring style - thank you for your kind words

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/19/2023 2:07:00 AM

Nice one D. You are so good at rhyming acrostics. This one is so well done. BOL

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/19/2023 3:04:00 AM

Thank you SV, acrostic style can be inspiring surprisingly. I never used to be a fan. Thanks for your kind words x

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/18/2023 4:37:00 PM

Friends can be a comfort, though Jesus is the most comforting, and the best friend of them all. God bless you with love, Gina

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/18/2023 11:38:00 PM

Thanks Gina x