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Dearest Miscellaneous To be seen in darkness is all I ask of this lifetime. You are it, my darling - I'm hopelessly in love! You occupy my thoughts on those rare moments I engage with the universe, catching me unawares by a first word of a first line so that I tumble into bliss... I adore it when you do that. I'm missing you. Currently I'm lost within my own maze of unarticulated thought and require a voice to guide me out. For you are like a magnet on the end of a fishing line, sent into the darkness to find the worthless piece of costume jewellery that's still worth recovering. I sit amongst the dust in an out of sight place, waiting to be brought to mind, searched for and found. Put in pride of place. For that, my love, is how poetry gathers me together. Like the snapping of the hypnotist's fingers - you bring me round, fully alert, alive and most glamorously present in the room. My dedication is flawed, as I write off the best of you for making me wait until the third line for the hook - or when your poem ends without circling back or hovering in a moment. It seems so many (poetry) lovers are easily pleased, and I observe, from my cusp of existence, others crying out in pleasure over what I see as lack lustre. Would I be better off like that, satisfied by the abundance of mediocre? Never! I want it all! Lure me in so intelligently that I can imagine I am the muse by the power of your language - to be drawn in so completely I am bound, momentarily, to your soul in the kind of ecstasy that merges every emotion into one screaming, explosive outpouring. I do love you. It's a shame you are fragments of other people's lives - but pull me in once again all the same. I'll happily be blind to the others entranced by the very same words on the very same pages, across years and lifetimes... For I truly love the way you make me feel. Ever searchingly yours Reader of Poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/13/2025 6:13:00 AM
Clever, articulate, and magnetic narrative!
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Date: 1/13/2025 6:38:00 AM
I consider myself the singularity of an infinite number of monkeys haha thank you for your kindness Craig. I wrote this one whilst on a roll :)
Date: 1/5/2025 5:30:00 PM
What a beautiful articulation of your love for your fellow poets. "Currently I'm lost within my own maze of unarticulated thought and require a voice to guide me out. For you are like a magnet on the end of a fishing line, sent into the darkness to find the worthless piece of costume jewellery that's still worth recovering" What deep desire for a voice to guide you. "I sit amongst the dust in an out of sight place, waiting to be brought to mind, searched for and found." No. You are already in the pride of place. You can be assured of it dear DD. Fantastic pouring of your thoughts.
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Date: 1/6/2025 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for the unexpected visit Valsa, always appreciated :) I'm so pleased you liked this one. It's been unexpectedly well received but I'll have to wait and see whether my side approach to the prompt affects it's chance in the contest. I just don't really have a 'go to' famous poet. Thank you for your kind words :)
Date: 12/27/2024 12:05:00 PM
OK, OK, lay out the grid and I'll join the search party.....damn this is a great write DD...Cupid with a pen shooting a thousand arrows into the poetic air. I gotta Fave this as I pluck the petal off the metaphoric flower whispering ..."she loves me.....she loves me not"
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Date: 12/27/2024 1:04:00 PM
I'm quite delighted by your enthusiasm John, thank you :D this may be my very first exclamative 'damn' - I shall add it to my collection of favourite statements made in comments :)
Date: 12/27/2024 5:05:00 AM
Dilly, I love this poem, so creatively penned, wonderfully penned, best of luck in the contest, happy new year ~
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Date: 12/27/2024 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Constance - I think the sponsor wanted a named poet, so we'll see if it passes as acceptable but it was fun to write :)

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