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stepping outside into the air to rest kissed by the breeze, gently caressed lingering in stillness, feeling less oppressed though dreams swirl, reluctant to manifest does a knight in armour puff out his chest to save me from the inner turmoil I detest softly the wind whispers ~ self rescue is best I will, oh I will, when I'm not so distressed salvation feels remote when facing life's test I cower in the night, fears still unprocessed safety in your arms, as willingly undressed heartache forgotten, temporarily evanesced

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Date: 11/24/2023 7:15:00 PM
There isn't anything that is permanent, it seems. The imagery unfolded like a memoir. Poem held my attention. I hope the story ends well.
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Date: 11/25/2023 1:17:00 AM
True. Glad you liked it Hilda. Hopefully she'll feel a bit more resilient in time x
Date: 11/24/2023 6:53:00 PM
I would have never guessed:) A most enjoyed read complete with smile, DD.
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Date: 11/25/2023 1:16:00 AM
Thanks Danny - you have to go where the rhyme takes you - I shocked myself haha :) as the poem ended there I decided it was all tasteful

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