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Le Paysage Bleu, 1949 By Marc Chagall

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all movements sweep perpetual motion the moon swims towards me, then away we orbit this moment, nearer collision the caress something to chase yet she slips from my grasp time runs in reverse tantalised by the beginning tormented by the end allow me to linger to live in the in-between not knowing if you approach the beginning or the end both beautiful in their own heart wrenching way the lateness of the hour makes my mind whirr confusion overtakes any reality I succumb to dreams my waking hour steadily approaching so real is she, tangible taken into the blue I commit to search the sea and the sky tomorrow so many flowers upon or beneath them she rests outside my dreams out of reach Brian Strand Contest 1st Place

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/23/2023 3:56:00 PM

Back to congratulate ! Well done

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/23/2023 11:03:00 PM

Thanks SV - this one really reignited my love of ekphrasis, they are such a joy to do. Like reading a good book, very quickly :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/23/2023 5:05:00 AM

Back with deserved congratulations Dilly, this one is honestly brilliant, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/23/2023 11:12:00 AM

Thanks David - your feedback is much appreciated:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/23/2023 2:31:00 AM

Congratulations, D.D.! My favorite artist!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/23/2023 11:11:00 AM

Lovely, I have done a few other Chagall's x

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/23/2023 1:29:00 AM

Wonderful interpretation and poetry. wonderful. God bless you and Congrats on your top win. Love, Gina

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/23/2023 1:38:00 AM

Thank you Gina, your kind words are much appreciated x

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/22/2023 9:08:00 PM

Excellent artistic interpretation evoking a cool, dream like state with your poetic pen, Dilly Dally! I loved this and it is a fave! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2023 9:47:00 PM

Thank you Laura, honoured that you'd fave it :)

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 8/21/2023 4:07:00 AM

I could follow you around a gallery all day Seeing through your eye .

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/21/2023 11:07:00 AM

I don't consider myself any kind of art expert Vickey, I'm just learning as I go. It's only since I started writing poetry in December that I had any opinions on art really x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/20/2023 9:30:00 PM

I like your interpretation D. For some reason I always thought she was lying in an open coffin and he was caressing her with a dove as a symbol of eternal peace in or around the church. Reading your wonderful descriptive poem, it makes much more sense. You are so good at these Ekphratic poems. Well done. Entertainment and education all in one with your beautiful poem. Cheers

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 11:22:00 PM

The description I found suggested the tango but I thought a coffin too (which is what the lay upon or beneath flowers is about). I've gone cockerel (rather than dove) for waking as they are together only briefly in dreams. I think you'd have a talent for ekphrasis - you are very story driven with your poetry x

Hat Bueckert

Date: 8/20/2023 3:46:00 PM

An interesting painting and poem alike, both do feel like the in between as you say, beautifully done, allow me to linger, excellent pause

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thank you H, I loved this one. I appreciate your kind words about my interpretation x

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/20/2023 2:57:00 PM

Well I discovered this one about 10:30pm, with an entire interpretation below it, yeah it really is the stuff of dreams, not like Dali’s, (spectre of sex appeal), lol!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/20/2023 3:12:00 PM

You should be ok, it’s an absolute masterpiece, that’s Dali as a kid standing beside the spectre, it’s brilliant isn’t it!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 3:07:00 PM

I'd be less likely to linger in the caress or indeed agree in the first place - if this haunts my dreams you're in trouble! :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/20/2023 2:26:00 PM

A mishmash of conscious and subconscious thoughts Dilly, you interpret this incredible picture so well, it really is a head bender, but you seem to have straightened it out for this reader, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 2:35:00 PM

I literally discovered the painting at 9pm and was totally taken in. It's so beautiful. I have a new respect for the colour blue :)

Triny Xiang

Date: 8/20/2023 2:25:00 PM

I can feel Marc Chagall talking to you through a passage of blue. You captured a lover's embrace as only a lover may know knowing we must wake from our dreams. Such is the seed for the next poem's reach. Bravo.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/20/2023 2:32:00 PM

Thank you, I can't imagine the power of these colours in reality. Even via a screen there's a breath taking beauty to the blue and the movement. Thank you for your very kind words and the treat of a 'bravo' :)