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Late September Days

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Leaves are still green; days are still warm. It’s all about to end. Summer’s holding its breath. When it breathes out again, it will, at last, be autumn.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/26/2023 12:03:00 PM

So nicely penned, Sara. I like the personification of summer on a breath hold. The nod to seasonal turnover also reinforces the flow of time. An enjoyable read. Cheers, Brian

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 1:22:00 PM

thanks, Brian, for stopping by and for your kind comments. You're right, the change of the seasons does reinforce the the flow of time....a wonderful thought, sir. have a wonderful afternoon, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/23/2023 1:27:00 PM

Time passes and seasons change, they'll even be different next year. Thanks for the imagery and thoughts on the change of seasons, Sara. Very smooth poetry to read. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 1:23:00 PM

thanks, hubby, for stopping by and for commenting on my poem. You always support me, and I'm grateful. Yes, the change of seasons is slightly different each year. As long as I can change the seasons with you, I'm happy. hugs, me

Ink Empress

Date: 9/23/2023 8:27:00 AM

Ah your words are always soul warming beautiful Sara, so gorgeous and flows seamlessly and the way you phrase things are so unique and artistic: I especially love “ summers holding its breath” That line blew me away, what a creative and visceral line showing how summer is fleeting. And then how you wrote “ when it breathes out again, it will be autumn” i feel this way about time always, how quickly time flies. Its just sad. Sometimes. Amazing and moving write as always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 8:39:00 AM

Hi "Ink"--thank you for your soulful comments about my September Days. I'm grateful for your reaction and response. I agree with you about time. The quickness of its flow is sad sometimes. Just this morning I realized that October is on the horizon. I felt twinges of sadness when I thought of it. Can't explain why. I just let the feeling wash over me and accepted it, trying not to dwell on it. May you have a beautiful, bountiful day.

Deb M

Date: 9/23/2023 7:01:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous Sara! Debx

Silent One

Date: 9/23/2023 3:43:00 AM

A short poem but with so much impactful imagery.. You always write so well...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 3:46:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One, for stopping by and appreciating my little creation. I value your opinions. Thanks for your kind words. Have a pleasant day. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 9/22/2023 9:39:00 PM

We are coming to the fag end of September when leaves are still green. But in no time autumn will bring the magic of colors. As summer will hold its breath, days will no more be warm. Sara, enjoyed your beautiful poem on the transition between summer and autumn.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 3:48:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Valsa. Yes, summer's on it's last gasp of air even here in North Texas. The leaves here are green but wilted from the hot, dry summer. We're ready for fall...I appreciate your kind words. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/22/2023 5:58:00 PM

I love the symplicity of this lovely poem, Sara:)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 3:48:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Daniel. I appreciate your comments. Enjoy your day, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/22/2023 4:57:00 PM

Hi lovely Sara, six yeses, a yes per a line of your smooth poem. Best regards & wishes. Have a nice day ~AA

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/23/2023 3:50:00 AM

thanks for your visit, Abdullah. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Have an awesome day, Sara