Languish

Lost hope of change, trapped in decline All my choices, yet none seem mine Never to flourish, could that be true? Guide concerns, find future view Unravel vines that tether in place Instigate mindshift for solid base Soar perhaps to obtain peace Hard times dissipate, end, cease

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/10/2023 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your creative Acrostic write. Have a great day............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/10/2023 9:59:00 PM

Thank you Paula x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/2/2023 12:25:00 AM

My validation code to that last comment was DD1 ( That should be an omen) :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/2/2023 12:37:00 AM

Ooh :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/2/2023 12:24:00 AM

Perfect Acrostic for Languish ! Has a downer effect just like its supposed to. The ambience you project is sorrowful but not hopeless. You found exactly the right balance. Not an easy task. Well done. Should be a winner for sure.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/2/2023 12:37:00 AM

Thanks SV!