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Lament

In bleak mid-winter, I laid myself bare. I gave you my vital organs, Your breaths more precious to me than my own. I gave you my mind, Open access, At any hour. Because I wanted you to know how much I treasured your words. I gave you my soul, Bloodied where I'd ripped it from the chasm- To show you my devotion. And it was still not enough.

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Date: 3/19/2021 11:28:00 AM
Honeybees suck up the best part of any flower then flit on to the next one; at least you were not stung! Aloha! Rico
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