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We once visited Belize It had the bluest seas I tripped in the water And bumped my daughter Landing on my knees © 2021

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Date: 4/12/2021 11:20:00 AM
Just one small suggestion: It would not hurt to add an "s" to the end of the last words in the second and fifth lines. That way, those lines would rhyme with the first as they are supposed to in a true limerick.
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