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what, I wonder, did you unlock winter songs of summer birds in a dingy cell with clawed-at walls in drawing rooms where princes died and all the soldiers marching by trembling in rooms

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2023 3:25:00 PM

Interesting work you have penned. It made me think so very unique. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/13/2023 1:20:00 AM

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, much appreciated

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/11/2023 8:32:00 AM

the imagery here is powerful. I felt a sense of dread when I read 'winter songs of summer birds.' I loved the somberness and poignancy of your words. Have to fave, have a good day, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/11/2023 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts Sara