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Journeying Thoughts

The lights were red Keep clear Encroach Long beard and hair Uncut, yellow stained When was last happiness for that man Broken wall, 2 thirds still good Rests on the floor Leaf it blows Cares not of thought Start again at hello I'm late, so sorry about that Don't worry Exclamation mark Eyelashes perfectly spaced Mind it ran but did not race Doors they open I arrive Accepted at this point in time Redeemed before I say a word Unknown to me If I'm absurd

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Date: 11/2/2023 3:53:00 AM
I enjoyed this style of poem
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:03:00 AM
Thank you, it was walking down the street with all the poem ideas I had no time to explore but felt I didn't want to throw away. I did the audio as I drove but loads of back ground noise and the middle was too hesitant :) (I'd listened to poetry recently and felt full of inspiration haha)
Date: 11/2/2023 2:47:00 AM
Thoughtful writing; nice to read
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you

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