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Jonah

Man o' mine, bravest o’ sailors, singing sea shanties with death, he wades through icy glaciers, o’ the frostiest breath. Cling to vein and steady this vessel, doldrum this destine my love, Jonah, thy mustn't wrestle, with the goddess above. If waves won't wallow in waiting, tears will not stop the storm, cruel sea, ever berating, 'til I'm a widow in mourn.

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Date: 12/25/2023 1:57:00 AM
Great use of metaphor here and analogy of poetic thought... nice alliteration also, i feel poetic techniques are important in a poem.. or it is just a write, right? Jonah they mustn't wrestle with the Goddess above.. nice... have a lovely day Kate, best wishes..
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Kate Davies
Date: 12/26/2023 12:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it :) I do love a metaphor!

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