Jigsaw

abandoned jigsaw missing pieces hiding in my head

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2023 5:11:00 AM

A striking metaphorical haiku/senryu. At my age I can certainly relate to those missing pieces, Peter, but am not ready as yet to throw in the towel :) ~ Regards // paul

Peter Rees
Date: 1/17/2023 4:52:00 AM

Thank you for your comment Paul. Every life a jigsaw, each with missing pieces.

Deb M

Date: 1/12/2023 12:53:00 PM

Wow Peter…three small lines but so mighty in meaning! I love this! Debx

Peter Rees
Date: 1/13/2023 3:44:00 AM

Hi Deb, many thanks for your insightful interpretation. Much appreciated.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2023 10:01:00 AM

Interesting. Now I am wondering so a good poem. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Peter Rees
Date: 1/13/2023 3:46:00 AM

Thanks Sara. Possibly a number of ways of reading this. Even I am wondering.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/12/2023 8:24:00 AM

Good one ! :)

Peter Rees
Date: 1/12/2023 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Heidi. Good to hear from you. Every life a jigsaw.