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Jesus Take the Wheel

Jesus take the wheel. The kids need baths and taxes due. ' number's on the 'fridge.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/5/2024 12:47:00 PM

Good and true piece here Robert'

Robert Warlov
Date: 3/7/2024 7:46:00 AM

Thanks. The application of the form to "Spiritual" content is consistent with the culture from which it was borrowed. If it is beneficial beyond its humorous motivations I won't complain.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2023 1:09:00 PM

I like your reply to me here. I know many who believe in reincarnation and some believe souls will be born into all the different astrological signs beginning with Aries. I found that interesting since Mormons specifically place Christ's birth at April 6. An Aries. There are so many theories out there. I like the reincarnation ideas. I understand how you feel about Catholicism. I find a lot of it to be just plain silly and babies being in limbo sickens me

Robert Warlov
Date: 11/15/2023 9:05:00 PM

"7th heaven" could denote its astronomical character. I would challenge the logic of its astrological character.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2023 12:51:00 PM

I liked your response to me. Yeah, I think of all the R rated movies I enjoyed. Probably those are the worst of my sins, just watching too much tv, but maybe it will count againt me. I was raised up to believe there are different "levels" in heaven, so I don't mind not being at the top. haha

Robert Warlov
Date: 11/7/2023 3:36:00 PM

I was being intentionally sacrilegious. Raised a Catholic, we were taught little, if anything, about Christianity. Our obligations extended only to obedience to rituals and authoritarian mandates ~ ya know . . . that Pope guy? I've heard of "7th heaven" and happened upon the idea of "paths" in the scriptures ~ " . . . paths of righteousness". Maybe they contain an astronomical character. :-o

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2023 3:45:00 PM

for me it seems like a note for the babysitter, so you are wanting God to babysit. I find that humorous if it was your meaning.

Robert Warlov
Date: 10/22/2023 11:14:00 PM

Like asking Jesus to hold the wheel while you light a smoke. ~ a note for the babysitter and if you get audited, the holy of holies will be an unimpeachable advocate! See why we got pitched from the garden?

Tom Woody

Date: 9/18/2023 1:42:00 PM

Ahh am I hearing Carrie singing in the background? Interesting senryu. Let the kids take their own baths :)

Robert Warlov
Date: 9/23/2023 7:00:00 AM

"Rapture" ~ when the elect is caught up in the air with the Lord. Description of workers ~ one taken the other left behind. "Trinity" ~ 3 manifestations, ignorant of "God Manifest" through anyone who has "The Holy Spirit". "Purgatory" ~ parable of a debtor having to pay an entire cost before he is freed. Indulgence is a "whole-cloth" product of "The Catholic Church".

Tom Woody
Date: 9/19/2023 8:57:00 AM

Btw, I've studied the Bible forty years. Never once seen the words rapture, trinity, purgatory, indulgences, etal. Hmmm... wonder where those ideas came from?

Tom Woody
Date: 9/19/2023 8:56:00 AM

Yes, a song by the lovely Carrie Underwood

Robert Warlov
Date: 9/19/2023 7:17:00 AM

I assume "Carrie" is the singer. Never heard it. Just heard of it. I assumed it referred to what Christians call "the rapture". I know a lot about Christianity. Too much. Thanks for correcting me on the form. I'll change it.

Robert Warlov

Date: 9/18/2023 11:50:00 AM

The only other way I know to salvation. Keep God laughing!