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It's never nothing

Let's start with nothing A slight headache Disgruntled by a faraway thought I'm in the place before Always later it's fine It's in knowing this that I rest Love will cascade Or I'll get distracted chopping vegetables I do enjoy chopping vegetables But, it will be fine Because that is my plane And I'll chop pico de gallo So I should go and buy a lime

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Paul Willason

Date: 1/13/2024 7:52:00 PM

Thought provoking piece...putting together what seems like an odd bunch of ingredients...and yet it has worked....well done. Enjoyed jumping across the boundaries of logic, very liberating.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/13/2024 10:55:00 PM

Thanks Paul! I always feel a bit of a chancer with these thought bursts. I feel there is something in the style worth practising regardless of the fact it doesn't follow convention of poetic or what people want to hear (in theory). I need chop pico de gallo and I now feel about 40% raw onion - I may go back to guacamole :D