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Is This a Good Time

IS THIS A GOOD TIME Is this a good time to mention the leaves on the trees Now darkening, and falling, as the August winds tease With hints our warmer clothes will soon be to the fore How long will be left, before we no longer sit outdoors It’s been a good summer; maybe far too hot for some Still turning over the soil as the weeds are never done Some flowers still in their glory, others now past grace Bamboo canes rearranged, so sunflowers stay in place Is this a good time which to go out, and mow the grass There are spots of rain in the air how long will it all last The windows need cleaning, I'll wait until the rain stops Go find my umbrella; and do a quick dash to the shops No salad today, its meat, tat’s, and veg in my stockpot Which I put on a slow simmer, then as left to be forgot I hate this fine mist of rain as it blocks my window view So I idle my time away, then as write this poem for you Is this a good time to mention the hassle we have seen How we're all learning we are all victims to the Machine O’ nay’, its best not, let’s just enjoy, what we have now Whereas, I will have you all cry out you pessimistic cow I can if you like, talk about the sunshine just not today It's hid behind the clouds and is not coming out to play I watch as folk pass by with an extra jumper on, or two It won’t be long we will be all suffering the winter blues Is this a good time to mention the peace as doors close Where we all dress down, and just about anything goes The cats lie on the window sill; they don't wanna go out Eyeing up the dogs passing, see what they are all about Dogs don’t care one bit about rain, or the gusts of wind But dragging their owners out that surely must be a sin I can smell the cooking coming from the kitchen, yippee It will soon be time for eating, both cats and hungry me Is this a good time to mention just how I enjoy my time Sitting here and making the lines of my poem all rhyme The sun may come out tomorrow and me in such a rush Writing down too quickly and amendments, then a must Keeping up with the gossip, as with it, the world’s news Though honestly; most of it gives me, the flaming blues It's only half eleven, I should leave my dinner until later Or, I will be another pound heavier, worse a diet violator Indiana Shaw . . . : /

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Date: 8/21/2021 8:10:00 PM
I enjoy when seasons change, when leaves rearrange their color and when rain presses on the window pane. Watching flowers bloom and then hide, as they say, "see you again soon". This is beautiful in so many ways. Such vivid images you paint with your words. Congratulations Indiana, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 8/22/2021 6:18:00 AM
Thanks, Brandy, I've been watching those 4 trees grow on the quadrant for the last 5 years, amazing what they have to say really, the more unusual darker green depicted a more winter green than expected for August, it kinda spooked me . . . : /
Date: 8/21/2021 7:11:00 PM
See how things work: Microcosm to Macrocosm -- A FAVE for me is now a FAVE for the Soup. No (False) Modesty Here. lol. Congrats, Diane, and write on! Happiness Always, Gershon
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Date: 8/22/2021 6:09:00 AM
Elo, Gershon, if only my interlect was as good as yours, and Mo's I must say, both of you do my brain cells in, he, he, he, keep spreading the peace Bro . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 6:51:00 PM
Great tour of the day and your dinner it sounds yummy. Congratulations on POTD,
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Date: 8/22/2021 6:05:00 AM
Elo, Eve, you have been in and out of my poetry for along time now, and you have been here on POTD before, the elevation of the day just wants me to try better, I have the words, just not the correct grammar, so it is always great to see those before, and you are one of them, blessings my friend . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 5:43:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Indiana :) - A great story ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2021 3:00:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, It's a first for me, yippee . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 1:38:00 PM
A refreshingly sweet poem, love imagery, I can smell the veggie and potato stew, congratulations on POTD Indiana!
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:54:00 AM
Cheers, Tania, believe me everything goes into one of my chicken stews, it's a open pan to me, he, he, he . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 1:04:00 PM
Indiana, wonderful writing, I enjoyed your poem a lot and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ Constance
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:52:00 AM
Appreciated, Constance, remind me not to win again, so many comments to reply too, he, he, he, blessings . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations for your great POTD Indiana. I enjoyed it very much too :)
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:50:00 AM
"Elo, Heidi, the day is over, back to the writing board , I've learned such a lot from honoured poets/poetesses such as yourself, the honour is mine, really . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honors, Indiana!! I really enjoyed your poem !!!
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:46:00 AM
Thanks, Mike, strange to be here, and so glad you enjoyed it, blessings to such a lovely poet as yourself . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 11:30:00 AM
Great verse. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:43:00 AM
Cheers, Victor, such a fine complement to receive from you, most appreciated . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations Indiana on poem of the day, is it a good time to mention it’s a wonderful humorous write, loved it… Belle
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:40:00 AM
"Elo, Belle, such is my mind set, I never quite see life as others do . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 9:56:00 AM
Wonderful writing... CONGRATS on POTD! God bless you, friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:38:00 AM
"Elo, Regina, many thanks, seen so many other poets here, I never quite thought I would see myself, ha, ha, ha, a sweet day, Regina . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful story/write. I love your "Is This a Good Time." Now let's eat. Have a blessed day as you write away................
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:35:00 AM
It was a nice day by all accounts, Paula, there's was coziness with the door shut, the cats relaxed on the window sill and the smell of the cooking in the air, and just alone with my thoughts, quite humbled it reached POTD, a blessed day to you too . . . : )
Date: 8/21/2021 8:11:00 AM
Is this a good time to mention...."It's just another day"....Nicely done(((and my validate captcha is....DAY...
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:54:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, John, the temperature had dropped from 25c to 17c with rain overnight, so I was just in a melancholy mood with the onslaught of autumn setting in . . . : /
Date: 8/21/2021 6:26:00 AM
Loved how you described it all in beautiful rhyme. Seems somewhat like my day except that I don't have pets. ...Is this a good time to mention just how I enjoy my time Sitting here; and making the lines of my poem all rhyme.... Loved this for even I enjoy that. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour and day. Looking forward to reading about rest of the day. God bless! Take care
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank Rama, getting all the end lines in some kind of parallel line is also a must to me, weird habit, slept the afternoon off, but, I was up for the twilight hours, where many a thing goes on, sooo . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 6:22:00 AM
Its a good time to mention how much I enjoyed your poem and the ending made me smile, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:40:00 PM
Put a flamin' kilo on, Jan, such are chicken stews . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 5:46:00 AM
Phenomenal write. BIG congrats on well earned poem of the day.
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, who would have thought a poetic daily record would make the day . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 5:46:00 AM
Oh I love this Indiana! Smiling wide. My dog be similarly eyeing said cats. Thrilled to see your work highlighted in POTD, congratulations! You are one of my favourites. :))) Have a FABULOUS day! xomo <3
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:37:00 PM
Hi Mo, I feel like I just made the grade, and you are a favourite to me toooooo's . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 4:35:00 AM
Save dear poet, you stopped 'bout noon; you wrapped up my summer, causing me to believe that u live in my region*sm So, will there be a part2, as in; noon untill maybe, twilight....well deserved "poem of the day"! Have a great Autumn equinox...much love, james
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:34:00 PM
Cheers James, a pleasure to meet you, I had a quick peep at your poems, what a lovely dainty poet you are, the hours of twilight seems a good time to me, hold out for that one me dears . . . ; )
Date: 8/21/2021 1:02:00 AM
Well written Indiana, hope this is a good time to say congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 8/21/2021 3:11:00 AM
What . . . *o* well, Tom, that's a flamin' first, wowzers, I've just checked, and may I say thanks for being the to first to congratulate me . . . ; )
Date: 8/19/2021 11:04:00 PM
I love your poem, it has a lovely rhyme, and great content dear poet. thank you for sharing, your pen. L)
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Date: 8/21/2021 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Rose, half a day in the life of indiana . . . ; )
Date: 8/19/2021 6:02:00 PM
I love the lilt of the Truth that blazes its way through the lines of this stunner, Diane. FAVE for me!! Thanks! :) Gershon
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Date: 8/19/2021 7:46:00 PM
It's a good job the poem stopped at noon, or I would have been here all day, lol, cheers, Gershon . . . ; )
Date: 8/19/2021 4:30:00 AM
This made me laugh Indiana "Is this agood time to mention the hassles we have seen How we are all learning we are all victims to the Machine O’ nay’ its best not, let’s just enjoy, what we have now Whereas I will have you all shouting you pessimistic cow" So much humor!
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Date: 8/19/2021 9:36:00 AM
Nice to make you laugh, Caren, I just couldn't let the last line in that quatrain go, he, he, he . . . ; )

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