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Invisibility Cloak

the world became invisible again as snow erased lawns paw prints, claw and pad prints chipped, gouged, tore tiny three pronged splayed fork feet lined like stitching and the seam ran drunkardly, none of it laid down yet all the little artists late for work, blank to start the show

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Date: 10/30/2023 3:10:00 PM
this poem was written with beautiful imagery and creativity. I liked the first line, especially 'snow erased lawns....' Well done, sir, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/31/2023 12:40:00 AM
Thank you for you kind supportive words, Sara
Date: 10/30/2023 8:51:00 AM
Nature paints a trail. Very creative!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/30/2023 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Mark, much appreciated
Date: 10/30/2023 6:23:00 AM
Very poetic view here. Such a pretty image that I was inclined to take a seat - great poem
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/30/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, and for taking a seat

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