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soft … slow, deliberate … verdant and cautious, but yielding … as if my lips are the chill of meltwater, and yours are dainty toes, testing, yet craving the plunge, (I wait for your press, hoping) … their delicate aperture widens, the pulpy prize inside dancing with mine like children in the rain - dewy with delight, and pensively playful … our thoughts tangle like seaweed in surf, moonglow dabbing your lids, as I peek through the slivers in mine … can you feel the thrum in my chest? it is yours, darling, as surely as light is the day’s - you are the Braille my hands ache to read, but that language is far too wordy for a moment this precious - this divinely dappled … let those things take care of themselves - let this world spin on, unattended, for you and I are of a quest, rapturous - a meeting of the malleable and marvelous sort … a sacred, whimsical pursuit of the most wondrous and savory treasure imaginable … our … kiss. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, September 6, 2022

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Date: 1/7/2023 10:05:00 AM
Ditto Richards comment.Exhilarating write.Brought one I experienced to mind .Felt I had inadvertently stepped into an open elevator shaft. The bottom just fell away.Guess my explanation could be misconstrued as nightmarish . I just know I fell and fell ,and when I gained my feet I thought they were embedded in love.It turned out to be much less but never forgot that kiss.Great kiss. Great write Monsieur Barden
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2023 7:39:00 AM
Yes - wonderful and terrifying at the same time … and my most favorite thing in the world, hehe. Thank you for your marvelous comment, Vickey - blessings!
Date: 1/6/2023 10:43:00 PM
Gregory, Oh great Caesar's ghost! Now that's what I call a kiss. -Richard
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2023 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!

Book: Shattered Sighs