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I step outside; the autumn breeze tousles my hair. The newly chilled air moves the clouds, streaks of brilliance breaking through from a patient sun. I watch my breath mingle with the crisp, cold autumn air. I pause, letting my eyes rest for a moment. I listen to the sounds and take in autumn’s aroma, allowing my brain to be still. I realize that autumn days are waning toward the inevitable colder weather ahead. Each nightfall comes sooner than the one before. I approach the wooded trails near my home. The autumn season stretches forth in front of me awash with multi-colored hues, from the serenity of browns to fireside reds and the gold of the few sunny days that remain. My mind wanders, and I find myself thinking of spring and the flowers to come, the brilliant fresh petals of pink and yellow. Then I remember with a laugh, “This is autumn, and she has her own special ways of bringing beauty. She gives by enlivening the senses, by making what could be dreary into the most bewitching of natural art. She gives by bringing a fresh start, feeding the soil, and kissing the trees into their patient slumber.”
the autumn season brings her own artistic hand evolving beauty autumn in all its splendor shows us how graceful letting go can be

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Date: 9/27/2023 5:04:00 PM
The Haibun master shares her poetry with us again. Excellent writing my love. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/27/2023 5:41:00 PM
thanks for your comments and for always being supportive, hugs me
Date: 9/26/2023 8:45:00 AM
Such a sweet "in the moment" haibun. And that final haiku is exquisite. A reminder that life is finite, and yet not necessarily finite. Renewal is possible
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 1:16:00 PM
thanks, Tom, for stopping by. Thanks for the understanding the 'now' of the moment. Yes, renewable is possible...we sometimes don't understand the depth of what that means. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/26/2023 7:52:00 AM
Brings her own artistic hand. I love autumn, for some reason. And i love the way you write these autumnal poems. So soul warming. And its the flow of your words not just imagery that really stands out for me and makes your poems pleasant ones to read, and the sincerity of your poems as they come from your soul. Love this. Everything about this is russet gold glowing!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 1:18:00 PM
thank you, 'Ink,' for reading my latest Haibun. I appreciate your comments and accolades. I don't know any other way to write than from sincerity. Thanks for noticing. I appreciate your phrase '...is russet gold glowing' kind of like fall. Fall is one of my two favorite seasons. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 9/26/2023 5:49:00 AM
..."kissing the trees into their patient slumber"....my favorite of the many poetic leaves afloat on your pen. A Fave for me as it soothed a dreary, grey sunrise and made it smile. Well done Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/26/2023 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, John, for stopping by. I appreciate your kind comments about it especially 'patient slumber.' I liked that too. Thank you also for faving it. I'm grateful it brought a smile to the gray sunrise in your area. Enjoy your day, Sara

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