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If Only I Could Love You

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If I could love you, I’d love you strong
with the strength of a million dreams  
my rains would flood you with passion
my storms, blow every leaf from your tree
leaving you bare 
so you’d share your soul with me  

If I could love you the way you deserve 
I’d search you as if searching for answers
to all the questions that are left unasked
I’d pursue you like dawn chases night, 
relentlessly 
reach into your shadows,
explore you completely 

If I could love you, I’d love you so deeply 
your heart would beat wildly with my whispers 
my desires would fill your every need 
your heart would hunger for no one but me  

I’d love you with vigorous colors
of rainbows and sunsets and vivid skies 
My light would bring you to your knees -
then maybe I could show you 
all the beauty in you that I see 

I'd show you how to set that beauty free ~
If only I could love you <3

 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/5/2018 5:21:00 PM
Love me, Love me. :):):) This is so powerful and so eloquent Becca. You're words stir the heart with divine insight and passion. So glad I found this one of yours. Has to be said, truly is one of your best. But it's a fine line between so many. :)<3
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Date: 10/27/2018 3:48:00 AM
Oh Rebecca, this is such a wonderfully express write on love. the emotions come through so strong. This write sings in its sensuality. You are the song Rebecca and the song is love. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX. A fave.
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:41:00 AM
Your words drew me in,a really lovely memorable piece.One that I would like to make a favourite so I can feel the emotion whenever I read it. Thank you Becca
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:23:00 AM
I'm sorry for not stopping by more often, to see you work your craft, but when I do, I know I will never be disappointed. Your keyboard must sing to the beat of your finger tips----May God Bless You Always
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful expressions and emotions! Great write, Becca
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:22:00 PM
I enjoyed giving this one another read. Hugs Rick. I hope you are well.
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Date: 6/20/2018 6:36:00 AM
The is one beauty of a love poem my friend. Loved every word.
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Date: 5/31/2018 8:40:00 AM
Wow, that’s an intense love! This should be Poem of the month.
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Date: 5/18/2018 7:16:00 AM
Intelligent, romantic, artistic and sensual.. Becca your write is amazing and I love it!
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Date: 5/16/2018 6:47:00 PM
Beautiful Becca
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Date: 5/14/2018 12:48:00 PM
very nice ...such deep emotions ..evokes many images :)))..a terrific poem
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Date: 5/13/2018 3:05:00 AM
See my updated comments
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Date: 4/28/2018 2:38:00 PM
"If you only I could love you "such a beautiful poem, a poem full of imaginations, a really enjoyable ome to read
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Date: 4/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
MY FRIEND, YOUR POETRY SINGS!!! Such exceptional and inspiring verses are your norm. Colors in this shining gem are vivid and sent to please.. A fav...
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:17:00 AM
Dear Becca....Wow Girl!! I hear a great song! You kicked poetic butt with this gem! The title fits a mosaic of directions, single or intertwined and your direction blew me away!
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:05:00 AM
Absolutely love this Becca, takes me back to my own, the old oak tree. i'm fav this..it is so special..
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Date: 4/26/2018 8:34:00 AM
If only, so many must ponder such things.. sometimes, somethings are not meant to be...
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Date: 4/24/2018 6:29:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful, Becca, I'm glad I found it this morning. A great way to start out my day! John
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Date: 4/23/2018 8:25:00 PM
Hello Becca, I love this poem. I feel the love as i read it. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/21/2018 7:24:00 AM
Returning with congratulations, Becca, on your well deserved and distinguished POTW honors for you exquisite poem.. Such a great choice!
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Date: 4/19/2018 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations...
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Date: 4/18/2018 11:31:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTW Becca.......Maria xxx
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Date: 4/18/2018 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTW honor, Becca. Beautifully written. T.J
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Date: 4/17/2018 5:23:00 PM
Truly excellent choice for POTW. DEFINITE PROOF THAT A GREAT AND CREATIVE POET CAN WRITE IN ANY POETRY FORM AND BRING FORTH GOLD MY FRIEND. You never fail in delivering.... A fav....
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Date: 4/16/2018 10:19:00 PM
Becca, a beautiful write for sure and congratulations on Poem of the Week ~
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