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Ice to see you

Spider webs frozen Ice laden lair Missing occupant Silken ropes bare Disappear quickly An invisible snare

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/16/2023 8:48:00 PM

Congrats. This had to be a winner. Love it.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/17/2023 4:47:00 AM

Thanks SV x

Eric Ashford

Date: 11/30/2023 9:54:00 AM

Like the way this reports and observes. A pithy yet strong write. Thanks Dilly.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2023 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Eric - appreciate you detouring into my poem list :)

John Lawless

Date: 11/30/2023 9:47:00 AM

perhaps the spider just left to get some pitons and a flask. Nicely done Dilly, paints a frigid picture.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2023 11:45:00 AM

All web catches become a flask quick enough. Why go to get a flask when the flask will come to you :) thank you for the kind words

Craig Cornish

Date: 11/29/2023 8:08:00 PM

Love how you are more and more weaving the pertinent out of the seemingly insignificant...in fewer but more poignant words...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2023 11:42:00 AM

Why thank you :) let's see if I become consistent at it haha

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/29/2023 6:48:00 PM

This is a sweet poem to a spider, a little bug thst I adore. I enjoyed the winter touch of a frozen web. This was a hardy, beautiful poem.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2023 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Hilda

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/29/2023 3:06:00 PM

such exquisite imagery, Di11y! Frozen spider webs are intriguing and fascinating...you've captured them perfectly. Well done, have a splendid evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/29/2023 3:21:00 PM

Thanks Sara, they are most inspiring (although I'm already fed up of the cold). I appreciate your kind words

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/29/2023 2:42:00 PM

Exquisitely bite sized :) SV

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/29/2023 2:52:00 PM

Maybe that's how all the contents disappeared :)