I Still Feel Guilty

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I STILL FEEL QUILTY Whipped lashed by hedge rows As walking down a dark path When suddenly - splat Indiana Shaw . . . "I went for a walk at 1 am in the morning to check on a empty house that was going when I stood on a rather large snail, worse, on seeing the house I didn't want it, a total waste of a poor snail's life" . . . : / "His name was Horace" . . . : (

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2021 8:07:00 PM

I feel your pain! (and the poor snail's too). You captured the moment well... :)

Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/21/2021 9:44:00 PM

I so wished I hadn't . . . : (

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/21/2021 11:13:00 AM

RIP, Horace, done that many a time, first the crunch of the shell then the squelch, yikes. 1am, cant you sleep lol Tom

Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/21/2021 11:19:00 AM

Bidding starts every week on a Thursday at 12 am, so, I thought I would go and have a look at it before deciding whether to put a bid on it, as it was a first come, first served thing, it was a total waste of time . . . : (