hiku

sparse clouds dot a sky of such inordinate blue spatial awareness

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2025 7:48:00 AM

Back with my congrats. I need to think up lots of haiku these days!!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/9/2025 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I always think I've ran out of ideas :) maybe I have this time lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2025 4:52:00 PM

Great formatting makes this one come alive, Dilly Dally.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/8/2025 2:01:00 AM

Thanks Andrea! It's getting a challenge to think of new formats now :)

Ink Empress

Date: 5/7/2025 11:27:00 AM

Oh look at you dear dd, an expert now i see in hiku! Hah! I have to write mine too! Maybe tomorrow! This is beautiful i love the last line the most! Best wishes! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/7/2025 11:55:00 AM

Thanks Ink lol, I had two lines for ages and that last line, hmm I'm unsure! Thank you for the vote of confidence :)