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Hide and Seek - a waltz wave

Rain drizzles from cranky skies, the sun playing hide and seek from the clouds. But soon the clouds tire of play and lift, drift away, revealing blue skies and sunshine's smile.
6/7/21

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Date: 6/27/2021 8:35:00 AM
A wonderful example of “A Waltz Wave” poem Kim… Belle
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/27/2021 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Belle!
Date: 6/14/2021 10:07:00 PM
Hide and seek is a romantic concept used beautifully with this style.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 6/10/2021 3:27:00 PM
What a magnificent image you created! Vivid and crisp! So delightful!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 6/9/2021 7:15:00 PM
awesome example for us , and I was wrong that your jesus poem could be in three contests since the WALTZ WAVe is YOUR contest!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/7/2021 11:37:00 PM
Awesome waltz wave, Kim:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:20:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 6/7/2021 11:33:00 PM
Cute verse Enjoyed it.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:20:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 6/7/2021 9:34:00 PM
-- and adorable too! Magic! Sweet, Kim. Blessings, Gershon
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:20:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/7/2021 4:34:00 PM
charming poem, Kim ~
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you, Line!