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Her Silhouette

The tree is here, still, in pure stone, Yet my love wakes buoyant as morn Her plump buttocks softly kneading On sheets ,while the fragrant air quivers To transform her rising silhouette--- Into a curve of day’s liquescent mounds. From Noel Onat 26th Jul 2015 Complete the Lines No.4---Pablo Neruda

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Date: 8/5/2015 8:37:00 PM
wowowow, I think you nailed Pablo's style. GREAT poem you got from that first line!
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Date: 8/5/2015 12:56:00 AM
ohh, from nature to passion-- impressed, noel.. big congrats for being part of my contest..
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Noel :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:36:00 AM
Fantastic write Noel! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Noel! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:42:00 AM
Noel, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:20:00 PM
Noel, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:38:00 PM
wow what amazing imagery congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:34:00 PM
This is such a beautiful piece! It should do well in the contest and I rate it a 7! Good luck! in the contest! Pandita
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