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Pictured is my great grandmother,

Ivy Morain (front and center) and her husband, Stanley,

with their brood of children, one of which is my

maternal grandmother, Helen Stainbrook (left of Stanley).

 

I arrive at the edge of the wooded area near my home in the quiet, dimly lit moments just before sunrise. I begin walking eastward, the crisp October breeze at my back. I pick up the pace, briskly walking toward the east. My rhythmic footfalls become my heartbeat, and my sight becomes a sense of wakeful dreaming. In October’s multi-colored foliage I find salvation for my brain, a place to rest old thoughts and gain new perspectives. I gaze toward the sky, my soul expecting to see a blue sun, as if the rays from the now rising sun would somehow be colder in the chilly air. Instead, the rays are still golden, divinely warm upon my chilled skin. The wind carries the aroma of the landscape, from rain quenched soils, to sunlit stream, to the evergreen foliage. I hear something rustling in the trees. I pause and listen…
Listening in a deeper way, I hear my ancestors walking behind me. "Be still and listen," they murmur. "You are the result of the love of thousands."

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Date: 10/28/2023 7:21:00 PM
A message we all need to keep in mind, methinks -- all the time. Anything we 'do,' we accomplish only by standing on our ancestors' broad shoulders, methinks.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/29/2023 5:17:00 AM
what a profound and deep comment. I loved 'standing on our ancestors broad shoulders. What a powerful statement. I'll keep those words in my heart and mind. Thank you, dearest Gershon. Have a pleasant Sunday, Sara
Date: 10/28/2023 9:20:00 AM
A most beautiful nostalgic poem that is touching and many will relate to.. I love the feeling of our loved one's aura surrounding us... as always you paint a picture with your words and finished it off so well..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 11:54:00 AM
thank you, dear Silent One, for visiting this nostalgic poem. I'd like to believe that the auras of my departed ancestors surround me, giving me courage, strength and wisdom. Grateful you appreciated the pictures I painted. Have a fabulous Saturday, Sara PS I do appreciate your continued visits and support. Thanks 1,000 times :-)
Date: 10/27/2023 4:07:00 PM
Sara, a wonderful poem with a great message. We are the result of the love of thousands. I feel this way with each visit to my old hometown.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 5:06:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Jerry. I appreciate your warm and kind comments. I love to visit my old hometown. I find it comforting. Have a pleasant evening. Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 3:54:00 PM
This is engaging and very beautiful. You should use it to start your best selling memoir. The picture is awesome. Oh how I wish my ancestors had been able to get such a photo preserved or taken. Your writing is very captivating and quite interesting. You leave us wanting more. Love and light to you Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 5:07:00 PM
Wow, I'm humbled by your wonderful comments. I'm grateful you found the poem captivating and interesting and wanting more. I appreciate your ongoing support, Karen. For the record I've been working on a collection of my memoirs titled "Shoebox Stories." Writing them has been deeply gratifying. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 1:36:00 PM
An enjoyable read and good homage to our ancesters, plus I like the poem style, very good
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 2:16:00 PM
thank you, Clive, for stopping by. I appreciate you and your kind words. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 1:24:00 PM
Dear Sara, I must express my sincere admiration for your exceptional poem. The power and beauty of a poem lie in its ability to convey profound messages through concise and carefully chosen words. Your heartfelt appreciation for your ancestors is truly remarkable, as it radiates from every line of your poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 2:38:00 PM
Kind Sotto, your admiration means a great deal to me! I'm grateful for your thoughtful words about my conciseness and carefully chosen words. I worked on this poem on and off for several days. Not sure why, but at the soul level I was feeling the love of my ancestors whom I've never known. Thanks for your stopping by and for commenting. Hope you have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 1:22:00 PM
"You are the result of the love of thousands." Beautiful work! Enjoyed!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 2:39:00 PM
ahh thank you, Paige. I'm grateful for your enthuasistic response to my poem. Have a lovely evening, Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 10:18:00 AM
“ my soul expecting to see a blue sun” that line stood out for me! How beautiful is that picture of your family. And your love and respect for your ancestors is so very evident here in your poem too dear Sara! I really love the imagery and descriptive depth of your lines. They speak volumes to my soul! Especially also loved “ You are the result of the love of thousands."“ wow! Sometimes i wish i can trace back to my ancestors too… your way with writing is amazing! I truly fan you beautiful soul
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 2:43:00 PM
dearest Ink--thank you for your enthusiastic words about my poem and the picture of some of my ancestors. I'm deeply grateful the imagery and descriptions touched your soul!! I also am deeply touched that you call me 'beautiful soul.' You lifted me up today. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 10:08:00 AM
Poem says much in succinct words. Thanks for praise of loving ancestors.
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Date: 10/27/2023 9:35:00 AM
Sara, I just love your photo album. I'm longing to build an ancestry tree. Like you I need to gather more information from family members I haven't spoken with. I enjoyed the walk with you very much, I feel healing, your journey reaches out, and we should listen. Xhugs ~Anaya
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 2:45:00 PM
Thanks for walking along with me. I'm grateful for your mindful comments, Anaya. You're right about the healing aspect. You're quite perceptive! Have a pleasant evening, Sara. I'm working with my uncle on building our family tree...it's more involved than I imagined but rewarding. hugs, Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 6:00:00 AM
Good Morning, Sara! This is a very beautiful reflection on ancestry, and it is a favorite subject of mine. We do have thousands of ancestors over the centuries and I am sure they would give us great insights that would speak into our life! Blessings!!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 8:16:00 AM
thanks for the visit, Daniel. I am glad to hear someone else is interested in ancestry. Yes, I wish I could speak with some of my more recent descendants....I have thousands of questions. Have a great day, Sara

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